Flowers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affect the natural flow and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I love flowers very much. I have a beautiful garden outside my house where I grow various plants. My family also enjoys gardening, which has inspired my passion since childhood. Whenever I attend special occasions, I like to wear floral accessories to complement my outfit.

Sugestão: Your answer is too long and lacks clear structure, making it difficult to follow. Try to start with a direct answer, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your vocabulary is relevant and accurate.

Exemplo: Yes, many of my family members love flowers, especially my father, husband, and daughter. In India, we have a special fondness for Jasmine flowers. Women often wear Jasmine in their hair to look more attractive, which reflects our cultural appreciation for flowers.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes, which affect comprehension. Focus on giving a clear, concise response with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about flowers in your area.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. For example, outside my flat in Dubai, there is a beautiful garden with flowers of various colors. These flowers create a calm and relaxing atmosphere every morning. Also, when I visit India, my father's garden is full of vibrant flowers, showing his passion for gardening.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but is affected by repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of beautiful flowers in my garden. Whenever a new flower blooms, I quickly capture its image with my mobile phone. Then, I share these photos with my family to show them the beauty of the flowers growing at home.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing due to unclear phrasing and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and directly. Use linking words to explain cultural differences and provide specific examples of occasions when flowers are important in your country.

Exemplo: Actually, sending flowers as gifts is not a common habit in my country; it is more of a Western tradition. However, in India, flowers play an important role during special occasions such as weddings and festivals. People use flowers extensively for decoration and rituals during these events.

× Of course, as like any other person, I like flowers too much.

✓ Of course, like any other person, I like flowers very much.

The phrase 'as like' is incorrect; 'like' alone is sufficient to make the comparison. Also, 'too much' implies an excessive amount, while 'very much' correctly expresses strong liking.

× Even my family members also like to grow plans in house.

✓ Even my family members also like to grow plants in the house.

The word 'plans' is a typo and should be 'plants'. Also, the preposition 'in house' is incorrect; it should be 'in the house' to specify location.

× That's where I have a great passion towards gardening and from my childhood I are loving flowers lot.

✓ That's where I have a great passion for gardening and since my childhood I have loved flowers a lot.

The verb 'are' does not agree with the singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'have loved' to indicate a continuous feeling from the past to present. Also, 'passion towards' should be 'passion for', and 'lot' should be 'a lot'.

× Whenever I go outside for a special occasion, I like to wear different kinds of plans I have.

✓ Whenever I go outside for a special occasion, I like to wear different kinds of plants I have.

Again, 'plans' is a typo and should be 'plants'. However, 'wear plants' is unusual; possibly the student meant 'wear different kinds of flowers' or 'wear accessories made from plants'.

× Sorry.

✓ Sorry, I meant flowers.

The word 'Sorry' alone is incomplete and unclear. Adding clarification improves communication.

× Yes, of course, most of my family members like flowers, especially my father, my husband and my daughter and are we Indians have a great passion towards Jasmine flowers and at the ladies of our Indian ladies have a habit to hear different kinds of Jasmine flowers in our hair to make us more attractive and beautiful as Indian, I have a great passion towards gardening and I.

✓ Yes, of course, most of my family members like flowers, especially my father, my husband, and my daughter. We Indians have a great passion for Jasmine flowers, and Indian ladies have a habit of wearing different kinds of Jasmine flowers in their hair to make themselves more attractive and beautiful. As an Indian, I have a great passion for gardening.

The original sentence is a run-on with multiple errors: 'are we Indians' should be 'we Indians'; 'passion towards' should be 'passion for'; 'at the ladies of our Indian ladies' is redundant and incorrect; 'have a habit to hear' should be 'have a habit of wearing'; 'make us' should be 'make themselves' for general statement; sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× Is of course even by Emma.

✓ Yes, of course, even in Dubai.

The phrase 'Is of course even by Emma' is unclear and incorrect. It likely intends to say 'Yes, of course, even in Dubai.' The preposition 'in' is needed for location, and 'Dubai' is the correct city name.

× Now metropolitan city like Dubai have a beautiful garden outside my flat and there is lot of flowers.

✓ Now, a metropolitan city like Dubai has a beautiful garden outside my flat, and there are lots of flowers.

Subject-verb agreement: 'city' is singular, so 'has' is correct. 'There is lot of flowers' should be 'there are lots of flowers' because 'flowers' is plural and 'lots of' is the correct quantifier.

× They are different colors of flowers that may cover mind so calm and relaxed Tees and others flowers giving as a beautiful morning every day and when I am in India are my father's also a great portion towards gardening and there is a big deal.

✓ There are different colors of flowers that make my mind so calm and relaxed. These and other flowers give a beautiful morning every day. When I am in India, my father also has a great passion for gardening, and there is a big garden.

The original sentence is confusing and contains multiple errors: 'may cover mind so calm and relaxed Tees' is unclear and corrected to 'make my mind so calm and relaxed'; 'others flowers giving as a beautiful morning' corrected to 'other flowers give a beautiful morning'; 'are my father's also a great portion' corrected to 'my father also has a great passion'; 'there is a big deal' corrected to 'there is a big garden' for clarity.

× As like every person, I have a habit and habit of taking photos of beautiful flowers in my garden.

✓ Like every person, I have a habit of taking photos of beautiful flowers in my garden.

'As like' is incorrect; 'like' alone is sufficient. Also, 'habit and habit' is redundant; only one 'habit' is needed.

× Whenever there is a new flavor coming up I go to I suddenly I go to go for my mobile phone and capture the photograph of that flowers and I want to send it that photograph it to my father, mother and every family members to show the beauty of that flower that grow in my garden.

✓ Whenever a new flower blooms, I immediately take my mobile phone and capture a photograph of it. I want to send that photograph to my father, mother, and all my family members to show the beauty of the flower that grows in my garden.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear phrases: 'new flavor' should be 'new flower'; 'I go to I suddenly I go to go for my mobile phone' is confusing and corrected to 'I immediately take my mobile phone'; 'that flowers' corrected to 'it'; 'every family members' corrected to 'all my family members'; verb agreement corrected to 'flower that grows'.

× Actually, if I say hornist Lee, we don't have a habit of sending book is to the guest or like this is a completely of western culture, but in India it's very there is a lot of importance will forward flowers in special occasions like marriage celebrations and the occasions related to our festival, There is a presence of flowers that is not my bins of booking, it's me.

✓ Actually, honestly, we don't have a habit of sending books to guests; this is completely a Western culture. But in India, flowers are very important on special occasions like marriage celebrations and festivals. There is a presence of flowers, which is not my business of booking, it's me.

The original sentence contains many errors and unclear phrases: 'hornist Lee' corrected to 'honestly'; 'sending book is' corrected to 'sending books'; 'will forward flowers' corrected to 'flowers are very important'; 'occasions related to our festival' corrected to 'festivals'; the last sentence is unclear but kept as is with minor correction. The modal verb 'will' was incorrectly used and removed.