Geography— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by directly stating your opinion and giving a reason. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "whenever up to date about geography." Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I didn't enjoy geography much during my school days because I found it quite boring. However, I understand its importance in learning about the world.

Sugestão: Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases like "longer tude and latitude." Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps us understand different cultures and the physical features of the Earth, such as longitude and latitude.

Sugestão: Provide a concise and clear answer with a topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I started learning geography in the fourth grade when it was introduced as a new subject in social science.

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural by directly stating your opinion and giving a reason. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Although I don't like geography very much, I would still like to teach it in the future if I get the opportunity because teaching is rewarding.

Sugestão: Answer clearly with a topic sentence and support it with specific reasons. Avoid grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries because it helps me broaden my knowledge and understand different cultures better.

× Well I don't like geography that much from my school times because I feel so bored whenever up to date about geography.

✓ Well, I haven't liked geography that much since my school days because I feel so bored whenever I try to keep up to date about geography.

The original sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'don't like' and 'feel' to describe a past and ongoing feeling related to school times. The phrase 'from my school times' is awkward; 'since my school days' is more appropriate. Also, 'whenever up to date about geography' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'whenever I try to keep up to date about geography.' This correction aligns the tense and clarifies the meaning.

× According to me, geography contains a result of data about the around world.

✓ According to me, geography contains data about the world around us.

The phrase 'a result of data' is incorrect; 'data' itself is sufficient. 'About the around world' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'about the world around us.' This correction fixes the preposition and phrase usage to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× So it has it has his own usefulness like we can know we can know about various other cultures through geography and longer tude and latitude of earth through geography.

✓ So it has its own usefulness, like we can learn about various cultures through geography and the longitude and latitude of the Earth through geography.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrectly used for 'geography,' which is an inanimate object; 'its' is correct. The phrase 'longer tude' is a misspelling of 'longitude.' Repetition of 'we can know' is redundant; 'we can learn' is better. Also, 'latitude of earth' should be 'latitude of the Earth' with the definite article. These corrections improve pronoun use, spelling, and clarity.

× When I was in the school at that time, I started to learn about geography.

✓ When I was in school at that time, I started to learn about geography.

The phrase 'in the school' is incorrect when referring to attending school in general; it should be 'in school.' The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense. This correction fixes the article usage with 'school.'

× It starts when I was in the fourth standard when we when they introduced us in new subject which is known as geography.

✓ It started when I was in the fourth standard, when they introduced us to a new subject called geography.

The verb 'starts' is incorrectly in present tense; it should be past tense 'started' to match 'was.' The phrase 'introduced us in new subject' is incorrect; it should be 'introduced us to a new subject.' Also, 'which is known as' is better as 'called' for simplicity. These corrections fix tense and preposition errors.

× It is a mean subject in SST which is social science.

✓ It is a main subject in SST, which is social science.

The word 'mean' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'main' to indicate importance. Adding a comma before 'which' improves readability. This correction fixes the adjective misuse.

× As I said before that I don't admire geography that much, but in future if I get a chance to teach someone about geography then I would definitely like to teach them.

✓ As I said before, I don't admire geography that much, but in the future, if I get a chance to teach someone about geography, then I would definitely like to teach them.

The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future' with the definite article. Commas are added for clarity. The modal verb usage 'would definitely like' is correct here as it expresses a conditional desire. This correction improves article usage and punctuation.

× Well, if you get a chance, so I will.

✓ Well, if I get a chance, I will.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'you' instead of 'I' and includes an unnecessary 'so.' The correct conditional sentence uses 'if I get a chance, I will.' This correction fixes pronoun and sentence structure errors.

× I will like to learn about different countries, geography becauses I think with the help of this I can broaden my horizons of knowledge and it came to know but different cultures in different different worlds.

✓ I would like to learn about the geography of different countries because I think with its help I can broaden my horizons of knowledge and get to know different cultures in different parts of the world.

The phrase 'I will like' is incorrect; 'I would like' is appropriate for expressing desire. 'Geography' should be preceded by 'the' when specifying. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because.' 'It came to know but different cultures' is incorrect; it should be 'get to know different cultures.' 'Different different worlds' is redundant; 'different parts of the world' is correct. These corrections fix modal verb usage, prepositions, spelling, and clarity.