Names— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details. For example, explain the origin of your name clearly and why it is meaningful to you, without repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: My name is special because it combines my father's name, Antonio, and my mother's name, Marina. This symbolizes their love, which makes my name very meaningful to me.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid confusing phrases like 'for him to become a God.' Instead, explain your preference for biblical names and why you think they are meaningful or suitable.

Exemplo: I would choose a biblical name for my child because such names often have strong meanings and reflect good values that I want my child to have.

Sugestão: Make your answer more direct and complete. Start by answering the question clearly, then provide examples of your siblings' names. Avoid incomplete sentences and grammatical errors.

Exemplo: No, none of my family members share my name. There are four of us, and my siblings are named Carol Ann and Catherine.

Sugestão: Try to answer the question directly and fully. Even if you are not Chinese, you can share your observations clearly. Avoid incomplete sentences and add linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Although I am Filipino, I have noticed that Chinese names today tend to be more modern compared to traditional names in the past.

Sugestão: Your answer does not address the question about popular Chinese names. Try to focus on the question and provide specific examples. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and irrelevant information.

Exemplo: I am not sure about popular names in China, but in the Philippines, names like Elsa, Pete, and Pedro are quite common.

× So I think that it has a strong meaning and that's why I have come up with this name and I love this name anime.

✓ So I think that it has a strong meaning and that's why I came up with this name and I love this name.

The phrase 'have come up with' is present perfect tense, which is not appropriate here because the action refers to a past event. Also, 'anime' seems to be an error or unrelated word and should be removed for clarity.

× I'd like to choose a name which is coming from the Bible and for me it was like a godly name that that is suitable for this child and also for him to become a God.

✓ I'd like to choose a name which comes from the Bible and for me it is a godly name that is suitable for this child and also for him to become like God.

The phrase 'which is coming from' is awkward; 'which comes from' is more natural. The repeated 'that that' is a mistake. Also, 'for him to become a God' is incorrect; 'like God' is the intended meaning.

× We are four in the family and we have different names for each of my sibling and for my.

✓ There are four of us in the family and we have different names for each of my siblings and for me.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'We are four in the family' should be 'There are four of us in the family.' 'Each of my sibling' should be plural 'siblings.' 'And for my' is incomplete and should be 'and for me.'

× For the eldest one she was named as Carol Ann, for the second one, Catherine.

✓ The eldest one was named Carol Ann, and the second one, Catherine.

The phrase 'she was named as' is incorrect; 'was named' is sufficient. Also, the sentence needs a conjunction 'and' to connect the two parts properly.

× I think there is a big difference now because as I have observed names today here in our country, they are more modern compared to names before and.

✓ I think there is a big difference now because, as I have observed, names today here in our country are more modern compared to names before.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Also, commas are needed to separate the clause 'as I have observed.' The phrase 'names before and' is incomplete and should be 'names before.'

× There are a lot of different names which are popular here in the Philippines, one of which is that simple name Elsa, Pete, Pedro and so on and.

✓ There are a lot of different names which are popular here in the Philippines, such as simple names like Elsa, Pete, Pedro, and so on.

The phrase 'one of which is that simple name' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'such as simple names like.' The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Also, 'Pete' and 'Pedro' are names but the list should be consistent and properly punctuated.