Puzzles— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and directly responds to the question, which is good. However, to improve, try to avoid vague phrases like "sort of" and add a bit more detail to make your answer more engaging and natural. For example, mention what kind of puzzles you enjoyed or why you liked them.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. Solving jigsaw puzzles was my favorite hobby because I enjoyed putting pieces together to see the complete picture.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. To improve, try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words to connect your points, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your sentences concise and directly related to the question.

Exemplo: I usually don't do puzzles during trips because I prefer spending time with my friends or family. However, when I feel bored at home, I enjoy doing puzzles as they help improve my logical thinking.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct grammar, avoid repetition, and provide clear reasons with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer number puzzles because I am good at mathematics and enjoy working with numbers. On the other hand, word puzzles are more difficult for me since my vocabulary is limited.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains unclear expressions. To improve, express your ideas clearly and use simple, direct language. Also, provide specific reasons why puzzles are beneficial for older people, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe puzzles are good for older people because they help keep the mind active and prevent boredom. Moreover, puzzles can improve their logical thinking and memory skills.

× Actually during trip I don't refer to do puzzles like thing during prefer I like to enjoy with my friends or relatives.

✓ Actually, during trips I don't prefer to do puzzles; I like to enjoy time with my friends or relatives.

The phrase 'during trip' is missing the article 'a' or should be pluralized to 'during trips'. Also, 'refer to do puzzles like thing during prefer' is incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition is 'prefer to do puzzles' and the sentence structure needs adjustment for clarity.

× But when I feel bored I like to do for selecting that it would not only for removing the boredom but also it will increase over a logic or common sense.

✓ But when I feel bored, I like to do puzzles because it not only removes boredom but also improves logic and common sense.

The phrase 'like to do for selecting that' is incorrect and unclear. The preposition 'for' is misused here. Also, 'increase over a logic or common sense' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'improves logic and common sense'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct preposition use.

× I like to do number parcel because I'm very good at mathematics and there I like to play with the numbers, but I'm very bad at word puzzle.

✓ I like to do number puzzles because I'm very good at mathematics and I like to play with numbers, but I'm very bad at word puzzles.

The word 'parcel' is a typo and should be 'puzzles'. Also, 'word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles' to match the context. Consistency in singular and plural forms is important for clarity.

× That's why I don't like to do that because my vocabulary is not much good to do that kind of things.

✓ That's why I don't like to do that because my vocabulary is not good enough to do those kinds of things.

The phrase 'not much good' is incorrect; the correct form is 'not good enough'. Also, 'that kind of things' should be 'those kinds of things' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun usage.

× I think it's a common place for everything, irrespective of the age or gender.

✓ I think it's common for everyone, irrespective of age or gender.

The phrase 'a common place for everything' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'common for everyone'. Also, 'the age or gender' should be 'age or gender' without 'the' to generalize the statement.

× Anyone anytime can do it to avoid boredom and to get more logic in the sum of the splendid idea, I think.

✓ Anyone can do it anytime to avoid boredom and to improve their logical thinking, I think.

The phrase 'Anyone anytime' should be 'Anyone can do it anytime' for correct sentence structure. 'Get more logic in the sum of the splendid idea' is unclear and awkward; it is better expressed as 'improve their logical thinking'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.