Hometown— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some unnatural phrasing and a minor vocabulary error. For example, "come into the gamut" is incorrect and confusing. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid unclear phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: My hometown is in the southern part of Malaysia, close to Singapore. Many tourists visit to enjoy our famous durian fruit.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but includes some unclear or incorrect phrases, such as "the food in the YEAH" which seems out of place. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and check grammar, for example, "need helps" should be "need help". Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: What I like most about my hometown is the friendly and supportive people who are always willing to help. Moreover, the food is delicious and easily accessible, which makes living there very enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear but the phrase "moved out from my hometown to study in Sydney since 2022" is slightly awkward. Use simpler and more natural expressions, and ensure correct tense usage. For example, "I moved to Sydney in 2022 to study."

Exemplo: I lived in my hometown for almost 20 years, but I moved to Sydney in 2022 to continue my studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by clearer sentence structure and linking words. For example, "no this because" is incorrect; say "no, because". Also, expand your answer slightly to provide more specific reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Personally, I would say no, because for young people who enjoy travelling, my hometown is quite inconvenient due to its distance from the nearest international airport.

× a lot of tourists would come into the gamut to enjoy our well known durian.

✓ a lot of tourists would come into the area to enjoy our well-known durians.

The phrase 'come into the gamut' is incorrect; 'gamut' means a range or scope, not a place. It should be replaced with 'area' or a similar noun. Also, 'durian' should be pluralised to 'durians' when referring to the fruit in general. 'Well known' should be hyphenated as 'well-known' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× They always lend a hand whenever you need helps.

✓ They always lend a hand whenever you need help.

The noun 'help' is uncountable and should not be pluralised as 'helps'. Using 'help' without 's' is correct in this context.

× Also, I love the food in the YEAH.

✓ Also, I love the food in the area.

The phrase 'in the YEAH' is unclear and likely a typographical error. It should be replaced with a meaningful phrase such as 'in the area' to make the sentence grammatically and contextually correct.

× I have lived there for almost 20 years, but I moved out from my hometown to study in Sydney since 2022.

✓ I lived there for almost 20 years, but I moved out from my hometown to study in Sydney in 2022.

The present perfect tense 'have lived' is not appropriate with the specific past time 'since 2022'. The simple past 'lived' fits better. Also, 'since 2022' should be 'in 2022' because the action happened at a specific time in the past.

× Personally I would say no this because as someone who likes to travel, I find it very inconvenient as it is quite far from the nearest International Airport.

✓ Personally, I would say no to this because, as someone who likes to travel, I find it very inconvenient as it is quite far from the nearest international airport.

The phrase 'no this' is incorrect; it should be 'no to this'. Commas are needed after introductory words and clauses for clarity. 'International Airport' should not be capitalised unless part of a proper noun.