Hometown— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add supporting details clearly and coherently. Avoid redundancy and incorrect grammar, such as 'I have heard from my parents that they belongs' should be 'they belong'.

Exemplo: I was born and raised in Delhi, but my parents originally come from Uttar Pradesh. My father is from Agra and my mother is from Mathura.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks coherence and has some repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases like 'UP is also good' which is irrelevant here. Also, try to be more specific about what you like about the transportation system.

Exemplo: I like the transportation system in Delhi because it is very efficient. For example, the metro network is extensive and the government bus services are reliable, which makes commuting easy.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but the grammar needs improvement. Use the present perfect tense for duration and structure your sentences clearly. Avoid fragmented sentences.

Exemplo: I have lived in Delhi since I was born, except for a few years when I stayed in Ghaziabad. Overall, I have been in Delhi for about 18 years.

Sugestão: Your answer is brief and has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to expand your answer with linking words and specific reasons, and avoid repeating words like 'the the'.

Exemplo: Yes, Delhi is a good place for young people because there are many coaching centres and competitive exams available. Moreover, the excellent commuting system makes it easy for them to travel around the city.

× But as I aware, I mean I have heard from my parents that they belongs to UP, Uttar Pradesh.

✓ But as I am aware, I mean I have heard from my parents that they belong to UP, Uttar Pradesh.

The verb 'aware' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to be grammatically correct ('I am aware'). Also, 'they' is plural, so the verb should be 'belong' not 'belongs' to agree with the plural subject.

× Delhi is the capital of India and so many monuments so big population.

✓ Delhi is the capital of India and has so many monuments and a big population.

The sentence lacks verbs and articles. 'So many monuments' needs a verb like 'has' to connect it properly. Also, 'big population' requires the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× We are using metros.

✓ We use metros.

The present continuous tense 'are using' is not appropriate here as the sentence refers to a habitual action. The simple present tense 'use' is correct for habitual actions.

× Easily commuting, autos, rickshaws, everything is available here also UP, UP is also good.

✓ Commuting is easy; autos, rickshaws, everything is available here. Also, UP is good.

The phrase 'Easily commuting' is incorrect; it should be 'Commuting is easy' to form a proper sentence. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity.

× I'm living here since my birth.

✓ I have been living here since my birth.

The present continuous tense 'I'm living' is incorrect with 'since' which requires the present perfect continuous tense 'have been living' to indicate an action continuing from the past to present.

× Few years I have spent in Ghaziabad also.

✓ I have also spent a few years in Ghaziabad.

The sentence structure is incorrect. The subject 'I' should come before the verb. Also, 'a few years' is the correct quantifier.

× But after that from last approx 18 years I'm in Delhi only.

✓ But after that, for the last approximately 18 years, I have been in Delhi only.

The present continuous 'I'm in Delhi' is incorrect for a duration starting in the past and continuing to present. Present perfect continuous 'have been' is appropriate. Also, 'approx' should be 'approximately' and the sentence needs commas for clarity.

× Yes, of course this place is good for young people because lots of competition, exams, coachings are available here.

✓ Yes, of course, this place is good for young people because lots of competitions, exams, and coaching classes are available here.

The sentence needs commas after introductory phrases. 'Competition' should be plural 'competitions' to match the context. 'Coachings' is incorrect; the correct term is 'coaching classes' or 'coaching centers'.

× Commuting system is very good the the.

✓ The commuting system is very good here.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repetition 'the the'. Adding the definite article 'The' at the beginning and removing repetition corrects the sentence.