Hometown— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Bạn nên tránh nhầm lẫn tên địa danh và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, mạch lạc hơn để người nghe dễ hiểu.

Exemplo: My hometown is Bac Ninh province, which is the smallest province in the North of Vietnam. It is famous for its rich cultural traditions and historical sites.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy tập trung vào một hoặc hai điểm cụ thể và giải thích rõ ràng.

Exemplo: I like that the people in my hometown are very friendly and intelligent. Moreover, the town is known for its excellent educational institutions, which attract many students.

Sugestão: Bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng và câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh thông tin không liên quan hoặc gây nhầm lẫn.

Exemplo: I have lived in my hometown for 18 years with my family. I am currently a student and I usually go to school from Monday to Friday. In the future, I plan to move to Hanoi to work as a high school teacher.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trôi chảy hơn. Hãy nêu rõ lý do và ví dụ cụ thể về các hoạt động dành cho giới trẻ.

Exemplo: I think my hometown is a great place for young people because it is a vibrant city with many activities. For example, young people can enjoy going to bars, sightseeing, and playing various sports.

× Well, my hometown is banking province, which is the smallest province in Vietnam, in the South of Vietnam.

✓ Well, my hometown is Banking Province, which is the smallest province in Vietnam, in the south of Vietnam.

The definite article 'the' should be used before 'south of Vietnam' because it refers to a specific region. Also, 'Banking Province' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun.

× Well, Bangkok is in reputation for it.

✓ Well, Bangkok has a reputation for it.

The phrase 'is in reputation' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'has a reputation' to indicate that Bangkok is known for something.

× Yes, cultural and traditional.

✓ Yes, it is cultural and traditional.

The original sentence lacks a verb and subject, making it incomplete. Adding 'it is' completes the sentence.

× Well, enjoy a lot of thing about my hometowns, One of them is that the people in here is very friendly and so intelligent because marketing is famous for as many price of Academy.

✓ Well, I enjoy a lot of things about my hometown. One of them is that the people here are very friendly and intelligent because marketing is famous for many prices of Academy.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'a lot of'. 'Hometowns' should be singular 'hometown' as the speaker refers to one place. 'The people in here is' should be 'the people here are' to agree in number. The rest of the sentence is unclear but corrected for grammar as much as possible.

× I have been live in mountains for 18 years with my family and I work as a student.

✓ I have been living in the mountains for 18 years with my family, and I am a student.

The present perfect continuous tense requires 'have been' + verb-ing form, so 'live' should be 'living'. 'Work as a student' is incorrect; 'am a student' is appropriate.

× I have almost to go to school every day from Monday to Friday and in the future I plan to go to Hanoi to work as a high school.

✓ I usually go to school every day from Monday to Friday, and in the future, I plan to go to Hanoi to work at a high school.

'Have almost to go' is incorrect; 'usually go' fits better. 'Work as a high school' is incorrect; it should be 'work at a high school'.

× I think my hometown is a grubbing place for young people because parking is a vibrant city, so there are many activity for young people can do like hit the bar and and go sightseeing and doing some sport.

✓ I think my hometown is a great place for young people because it is a vibrant city, so there are many activities for young people to do like going to bars, sightseeing, and doing some sports.

'Grubbing' is incorrect; 'great' fits the context. 'Parking' should be 'it'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities'. The phrase 'young people can do like hit the bar' is awkward; corrected to 'young people to do like going to bars'. 'Doing some sport' should be 'doing some sports'.