Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and use correct verb forms and prepositions. Add one specific example of typical tasks to show range.

Exemplo: I work as a sales and support coordinator at UMM, an e-commerce company. I mainly resolve customer queries by email, chat and phone; for example, I handle order issues and track shipments to ensure timely delivery.

Sugestão: Give a concise location and structure of the company with correct sentences and fewer repetitions. Use linking words (for example, 'one' and 'the other') and be specific about locations and functions.

Exemplo: I work for an e-commerce company that specializes in gemstones and jewellery. One office is the warehouse and inventory located in Jaipur, and the other handles design and online operations at our headquarters.

Sugestão: Avoid fillers and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, word forms). Give a short reasoned answer with one or two supporting points using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because it gives me opportunities to learn new skills. For example, I attend weekly training sessions and collaborate with experienced colleagues in a friendly environment.

Sugestão: Be more natural and correct grammar (plural/singular, article use). Keep it concise and include one specific detail that shows personal preference.

Exemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because it is in a calm area and my colleagues are very supportive. I also enjoy the on-site cafeteria with a good coffee machine, which makes breaks pleasant.

Sugestão: Give a clear, organized statement about plans using correct tense and linking words. State a short-term and a longer-term goal if possible, and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I plan to continue developing my career in this field. In the short term, I want to improve my customer service and product knowledge, and in the longer term I hope to move into a supervisory or management role within the company.

× My job mainly involves to resolve customer queries over the e-mail chart or call.

✓ My job mainly involves resolving customer queries via email chat or phone.

After the verb 'involve' the correct form is the gerund (verb + -ing), not the infinitive. Also 'e-mail chart' is incorrect; use 'email chat' or 'via email' and 'call' should be 'phone' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'involves resolving' and 'via email chat or phone'.

× I am working with an e-commerce organization which is specialized for gemstones and their jewellery.

✓ I work for an e-commerce organization that specializes in gemstones and their jewellery.

Use simple present 'work' for regular employment rather than continuous 'am working' in this context; also use 'that specializes in' rather than 'which is specialized for'. 'For' is incorrect with 'specialized'.

× So they they having two offices one is inventory in the warehouse which is in which is located in Jaipur and another offers the whole process from the where the from.

✓ They have two offices: one is a warehouse inventory located in Jaipur, and the other handles the entire production process.

Use correct verb form 'have' for the plural subject 'they' (not 'having'). Remove duplicate 'they'. Simplify and correct phrases: 'one is inventory in the warehouse which is located in Jaipur' -> 'one is a warehouse inventory located in Jaipur'. 'Another offers the whole process from the where the from' is ungrammatical; replace with 'the other handles the entire production process'.

× Yes, of course, because, umm, they allows me to enhance my skills everyday with by giving me new opportunities, even uh, the work in working environment is true friendly, which helps me to work enjoying uh, to enjoying and.

✓ Yes, of course, because they allow me to enhance my skills every day by giving me new opportunities. The working environment is very friendly, which helps me enjoy my work.

Subject-verb agreement: 'they allow' not 'they allows'. 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb) - use 'every day'. Remove unnecessary fillers and incorrect prepositions ('with by'). 'Work in working environment' is redundant; use 'working environment'. 'True friendly' -> 'very friendly'. Use 'helps me enjoy my work' rather than awkward 'helps me to work enjoying'.

× I like the workplace because all the surroundings is located in the calm place and every colleague of mine is very supportive.

✓ I like the workplace because the surroundings are calm and all of my colleagues are very supportive.

Use plural verb 'are' to agree with plural noun 'surroundings' (subject-verb agreement). 'All the surroundings is located in the calm place' is awkward; 'the surroundings are calm' is natural. 'Every colleague of mine is' -> 'all of my colleagues are' for clarity.

× Even they have a cafeteria, beautiful cafeteria having a coffee machine so I love to work there.

✓ They even have a beautiful cafeteria with a coffee machine, so I love working there.

Move 'even' and reorder for natural English: 'They even have a beautiful cafeteria with a coffee machine.' Use 'with' instead of 'having'. 'I love working there' is smoother than 'I love to work there'.

× Right now where I'm working they helps me a lot through developing my skills.

✓ Right now, where I'm working they help me a lot by helping me develop my skills.

Subject-verb agreement: use 'help' with plural 'they', not 'helps'. 'Through developing my skills' is awkward; use 'by helping me develop my skills' or 'by providing opportunities to develop my skills'.

× So here I'm working since last three years.

✓ I have been working here for the last three years.

When indicating an action that started in the past and continues to the present, use present perfect continuous ('have been working') or present perfect ('have worked') and 'for' with a period of time: 'for the last three years'. 'Since' requires a point in time (e.g., 'since 2019').

× So I have been seeing myself to working in this field only for the future and growing.

✓ I see myself working in this field in the future and continuing to grow.

'See oneself' is followed by a gerund: 'see myself working', not 'to working'. Remove 'have been' which is unnecessary here; use simple present 'I see myself' for a future plan. 'For the future' -> 'in the future'. 'And growing' -> 'and continuing to grow' for clarity.