Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говорите более грамотно и связно: начните с короткого прямого предложения, затем добавьте одно-два уточняющих предложения. Избегайте ошибок в построении предложений (например, «I am studying at 17 school» — лучше «at School No. 17»), и исправьте грамматику («Will find to good job» — «I hope it will help me find a good job»). Используйте связки: because, so, and. Тренируйтесь произносить фразы естественно и компактно (не более 3–4 предложений).

Exemplo: I am a student at School No. 17. I am studying English because I believe it will help me find a good job in the future. Right now I am focusing on improving my language skills and studying hard.

Sugestão: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и упростите фразу: используйте короткую позитивную структуру и ясные причины. Конструкция «I am don't work» неверна; используйте «I don’t work» или «I am not working». Добавьте связку (because) для объяснения, и избегайте лишних слов («working on myself» можно заменить на «focusing on my studies»).

Exemplo: I don’t work at the moment because I’m focusing on my studies. I want to improve my English and other skills before starting a job.

Sugestão: Сделайте предложение грамматически правильным и конкретнее: используйте определённые описания (например, «historical sites», «calm lifestyle»). Исправьте порядок слов и пропуски: «Bukhara is a good place to work because it has attractive places and a relaxed atmosphere.» При возможности добавьте сравнение или пример для конкретики.

Exemplo: Yes, I think Bukhara is a good place to work because it has many historical sites and a relaxed atmosphere. For example, people can enjoy quiet streets and short commutes, which makes life less stressful.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте ответ короче и яснее, исправьте словосочетание «local communications» (лучше «local contacts» или «how things work here»). Укажите причину и конкретный пример: например, знание людей или удобство. Используйте связки: because, so, therefore.

Exemplo: Yes, I would because it is my birthplace and I know many local people. I understand how things work here, so it would be easier to find work and settle in.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте цель ясно и исправьте ошибки: вместо «I would put stay a translator» скажите «I would like to be a translator» или «I want to work as a translator». Исправьте времена и согласование: «I love learning new languages and communicating with people from different countries.» Добавьте одну причину и пример, как вы планируете достигнуть цели (study, practice, certificates).

Exemplo: In the future I would like to work as a translator because I love learning new languages and communicating with people from different countries. To prepare, I plan to study translation and practice with native speakers.

× Well honestly I am a student I am studying at 17 school now I am learning English language because I think it helps me in the future. Will find to good job.

✓ Well, honestly I am a student. I am studying at School 17 now. I am learning English because I think it will help me find a good job in the future.

The original contains run-on sentences, missing articles, incorrect word order and incorrect verb forms. Split into shorter sentences for clarity and correct articles: 'School 17' (proper noun), remove 'language' after English (unnecessary), change 'helps me in the future' to 'will help me find a good job in the future' to express purpose and correct future reference. Use 'find a good job' not 'Will find to good job'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Honestly, I am don't work at the moment because now I am focusing my study and working on myself.

✓ Honestly, I don't work at the moment because I am focusing on my studies and working on myself.

Incorrect auxiliary placement 'I am don't' should be 'I don't'. Also 'focusing my study' needs preposition 'on' and plural 'studies' is more natural. This fixes subject-auxiliary order and preposition use. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, I think Bukhara a good place to work because here have the attracted places and relaxed atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I think Bukhara is a good place to work because it has attractive places and a relaxed atmosphere.

Missing verb 'is' (therebe/connective), incorrect verb 'have' needs subject 'it has', 'attracted places' is wrong adjective form — use 'attractive'. Add article 'a' before 'relaxed atmosphere'. Also 'here' is unnecessary; use 'it has'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I would, because this here is my birthplace and I know all local communications here.

✓ Yes, I would, because this is my birthplace and I know the local area and people.

Redundant 'here' and awkward phrase 'local communications'. Replace with 'the local area and people' to convey familiarity. Remove one 'here' and use 'this is my birthplace'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× In my opinion, I think in the future I would put stay a translator because I love learning new languages and I am communicated with different country people.

✓ In my opinion, in the future I would like to become a translator because I love learning new languages and communicating with people from different countries.

Phrase 'would put stay' is ungrammatical; use 'would like to become' for future career intention. 'I am communicated' is passive and incorrect; use 'communicating with people from different countries'. Also 'different country people' should be 'people from different countries'. Grammar problem type ID:10