Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but a bit short and lacks detail. Try to add a brief explanation about your previous job or your current plans to make it more informative and natural.

Exemplo: Currently, I'm unemployed as I left my previous job two months ago. I am now focusing on improving my skills and looking for new opportunities in my field.

Sugestão: Your answer provides good information but has some grammatical errors and lacks smooth linking. Try to use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: I work at an education consultancy firm. When I first joined, I was an application manager. However, after working hard and gaining experience, I was promoted to CEO. I have been working there for over a year now.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some awkward phrasing. Try to express your feelings and experiences more clearly and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: At first, I was unsure if I should accept the job because I was new to this field. However, after starting, I learned a lot from my students and partner universities. I believe accepting the job was one of my best decisions.

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct grammar and avoid repeating similar ideas to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: Of course, I love working there because it provides a welcoming and learning-friendly environment. Every day offers new opportunities to learn from students or teach them, which makes it a great experience.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Having worked here for a long time, I have set new goals for my future. I aspire to become a teacher in a school or college. Therefore, I am currently preparing myself by improving my skills and knowledge to fit those roles.

× I'm working in a education consultancy firm.

✓ I'm working in an education consultancy firm.

The word 'education' starts with a vowel sound, so the correct article to use is 'an' instead of 'a'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

× I when I got the job, my position was application manager.

✓ When I got the job, my position was application manager.

The sentence has an extra 'I' which makes it ungrammatical. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× my position was application manager.

✓ my position was an application manager.

When referring to a job title in this context, it is correct to use the indefinite article 'an' before 'application manager'.

× I got promoted to CEO.

✓ I got promoted to the CEO.

When referring to a specific position like 'CEO' in a company, it is common to use the definite article 'the' before the title.

× It has been uh, like more than one year I have been working over there.

✓ It has been, uh, like more than one year that I have been working over there.

The sentence lacks a conjunction or relative pronoun to connect the two parts properly. Adding 'that' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I was a bit delusional that if I should get the opportunity or not as I was really new to this field.

✓ I was a bit doubtful about whether I should get the opportunity or not as I was really new to this field.

The word 'delusional' is incorrect in this context; 'doubtful' fits better. Also, 'that if' is incorrect; 'about whether' is the correct phrase to express uncertainty.

× I got to learn so many things for my students and from other universities and everyone that I thought it was one of the my best decision by taking the opportunity.

✓ I got to learn so many things for my students and from other universities and everyone, and I thought it was one of my best decisions to take the opportunity.

The phrase 'one of the my best decision' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my best decisions'. Also, 'by taking' should be 'to take' to express purpose.

× I really should it, because of it keeps every learning environment and very welcoming environment that every day there is some sort of learning opportunities.

✓ I really should it, because it keeps a learning environment and a very welcoming environment where every day there are some sort of learning opportunities.

The phrase 'because of it keeps every learning environment' is incorrect; it should be 'because it keeps a learning environment'. Also, 'there is some sort of learning opportunities' should be 'there are some sort of learning opportunities' to agree with plural 'opportunities'.

× there is some sort of learning opportunities.

✓ there are some sort of learning opportunities.

The subject 'learning opportunities' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× I kinda set up my new goals and aspiration and the future.

✓ I kinda set up my new goals and aspirations for the future.

The word 'aspiration' should be plural 'aspirations' to match 'goals'. Also, 'and the future' should be 'for the future' to express purpose.

× I want to see myself as a teacher in a school or in a college.

✓ I want to see myself as a teacher at a school or at a college.

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate when referring to working or teaching at an institution like a school or college.

× I have been improving my skills and knowledge so that I get fit on those roles.

✓ I have been improving my skills and knowledge so that I fit those roles.

The phrase 'get fit on those roles' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'fit those roles' without 'get' or 'on'.