Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some pronunciation and clarity issues, such as 'Bathroom' instead of 'Batumi'. Try to speak clearly and provide a complete sentence with correct place names. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I'm currently working as a lawyer at the Batumi Sports Center.

Sugestão: Good direct answer. To improve, try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and add a bit more detail to enrich your response, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Currently, I work as a lawyer at the Batumi Sports Center, which is a great place for sports activities.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but is unclear and contains hesitations. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and avoid repetition. Be specific about why it's a good place.

Exemplo: Yes, it's a very good place to work because the ice arena is comfortable, the temperature is pleasant in summer, and my coworkers are friendly and supportive.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to speak more fluently without filler words and explain clearly why you like your work, using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because my job involves preparing contracts and agreements with athletes and coaches, which I find very interesting.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically, using correct grammar and linking words to explain your future plans.

Exemplo: I believe sports law in Georgia is outdated since Soviet times, so I plan to write improved legislation and submit it to the parliament.

× I'm not a student now I'm working at Bathroom Sports Center as a lawyer.

✓ I'm not a student now; I'm working at Batumi Sports Center as a lawyer.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation between two independent clauses. Using a semicolon or a period separates the ideas clearly, improving readability and grammatical correctness.

× I'm working at Bathroom Sports Center as a lawyer.

✓ I'm working at Batumi Sports Center as a lawyer.

The name 'Bathroom Sports Center' seems to be a typo or incorrect. The correct name is likely 'Batumi Sports Center'. Proper nouns should be accurate to convey the intended meaning.

× So, uh, one moment said I'm working in ice arena and in summer at this, this place is not very hot and the coworkers are very good people.

✓ So, uh, at the moment, I work in the ice arena, and in summer at this place, it is not very hot, and the coworkers are very good people.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and missing prepositions. 'One moment said' is incorrect; 'at the moment' is the correct phrase. Also, 'working in ice arena' needs the definite article 'the'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So, uh, one moment said I'm working in ice arena and in summer at this, this place is not very hot and the coworkers are very good people.

✓ So, uh, at the moment, I work in the ice arena, and in summer at this place, it is not very hot, and the coworkers are very good people.

Prepositions 'in' and 'at' are used incorrectly or missing articles. 'In ice arena' should be 'in the ice arena'. Also, 'at this, this place' is redundant; 'at this place' is correct.

× Uh, I like, uh, uh, my work is very interesting because, uh, make a sport.

✓ Uh, I like my work; it is very interesting because I make sports contracts.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Make a sport' is incomplete and unclear. The correction clarifies the meaning and connects ideas properly.

× Contracts and agreements with athletes and coaches are very interesting.

✓ Contracts and agreements with athletes and coaches are very interesting.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× So I think the rule of sports is very older in Georgia, so it is returning Soviet Union.

✓ So I think the role of sports is very old in Georgia, as it dates back to the Soviet Union.

'Rule' should be 'role' to convey the intended meaning. 'Very older' is incorrect; 'very old' or simply 'old' is correct. 'Returning Soviet Union' is unclear; 'dates back to the Soviet Union' is clearer.

× So I think I can write a better one and send the projects to parliament.

✓ So I think I can write a better law and send the projects to parliament.

The phrase 'write a better one' is vague. Specifying 'law' clarifies the meaning. The sentence is restructured for clarity.