Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), try to use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use clearer linking words and correct verb forms to make your answer more natural and effective.

Exemplo: I am currently a 12th-grade student at a high school in Phnom Penh, the capital city of Cambodia. I enjoy studying there because the school offers many interesting subjects that teach me a lot.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct plural forms and linking words to connect ideas clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'have them' and be more specific about your experiences.

Exemplo: I don't have a paid job because I am still a high school student. However, I enjoy volunteering in social and community activities, which helps me grow and meet many new people.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear sentence structure and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'moreover' properly, and explain your ideas fully.

Exemplo: Yes, I think volunteering is a good place for me to work because it is one of my favorite activities after class. It allows me to meet many people, especially those who need help. Moreover, volunteering helps me understand others better.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Avoid unclear phrases like 'get to have my citizens' and explain your ideas more precisely.

Exemplo: Yes, I like the place where I volunteer because it teaches me how to help other people and understand the world better. It also helps me grow stronger and wiser.

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), improve sentence clarity by using correct prepositions and singular/plural forms. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: After graduating from university, I want to work for the government as an economist because I want to help my country grow and have a strong economy. I hope this job will bring me a bright future.

× I am 12th grade students in high school in Phnom Penh, which is the capital city of Cambodia.

✓ I am a 12th grade student in high school in Phnom Penh, which is the capital city of Cambodia.

The subject 'I' is singular, so 'students' should be singular 'student' to agree in number. Also, 'a' is needed before '12th grade student' to indicate one person.

× I love starring out there because it has a lot of subjects and it's very interesting, especially it teach me a lot during the studying time.

✓ I love studying there because it has a lot of subjects and it's very interesting, especially it teaches me a lot during study time.

'Starring out' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'studying'. Also, 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'During the studying time' is better as 'during study time' for natural expression.

× I love volunteering in many activity like the social activities or in my community.

✓ I love volunteering in many activities like social activities or in my community.

'Activity' should be plural 'activities' because 'many' requires a plural noun.

× So I feel like it's helped me to grow and I can meet a lot of people and have them.

✓ So I feel like it has helped me to grow and I can meet a lot of people and get to know them.

'It's' is a contraction of 'it is' which is incorrect here; 'it has' is correct. Also, 'have them' is unclear; 'get to know them' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I think it is a good place for me to work because I'm volunteering is always one of my favorite activities to do after like joining my class and it's also helped me to access many people around me, especially someone who needs my help.

✓ Yes, I think it is a good place for me to work because volunteering is always one of my favorite activities to do after attending my classes and it has also helped me to meet many people around me, especially those who need my help.

'I'm volunteering' is incorrect; 'volunteering' as a gerund is correct. 'After like joining my class' is awkward; 'after attending my classes' is better. 'Access many people' is incorrect; 'meet many people' is appropriate. 'Someone' should be plural 'those' to match 'many people'.

× Moreover, volunteering also allow me to understand what.

✓ Moreover, volunteering also allows me to understand many things.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'volunteering'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'many things' completes the thought.

× Yes, I do like the place where I work because it teach me a lot how to helps others people, how to look into this world and especially help me to grow stronger and wiser.

✓ Yes, I do like the place where I work because it teaches me a lot about how to help other people, how to look at this world, and especially helps me to grow stronger and wiser.

'Teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with singular 'it'. 'Helps' should be used instead of 'helps' for parallel structure. 'Others people' is incorrect; 'other people' is correct. 'Look into this world' is better as 'look at this world'.

× Moreover, I can get to have my citizens and live with the life that I want.

✓ Moreover, I can become a citizen and live the life that I want.

'Get to have my citizens' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended meaning is 'become a citizen'. 'Live with the life' is better as 'live the life'.

× Well, after graduating from university, I want to apply for a job at the government for economics because I always want to be an economist and have my country to grow and have a strong economics in the future.

✓ Well, after graduating from university, I want to apply for a job in the government in economics because I have always wanted to be an economist and help my country grow and have a strong economy in the future.

'At the government for economics' is incorrect; 'in the government in economics' is better. 'Have my country to grow' should be 'help my country grow'. 'Have a strong economics' is incorrect; 'have a strong economy' is correct.