Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为完整且自然，但句子较长且略显复杂，建议简化句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

Exemplo: I am a university student studying International Economics. I chose this major because I am interested in how countries trade and manage their economies. I think this knowledge is very important in today's globalized world.

Sugestão: 回答不够自然，语法和表达有误，且内容重复。建议直接回答并简洁说明学习地点和活动。

Exemplo: I don't work because I am a student. I spend most of my time at university studying and reviewing my lessons.

Sugestão: 表达有些不自然，部分词汇使用不当，建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁句子表达环境的优点。

Exemplo: Yes, the school is a great place to study because it provides a quiet and focused environment where I can concentrate on learning without distractions.

Sugestão: 回答内容较好，但句子结构不够流畅，建议调整语序并使用更自然的表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I like my university. It is a perfect place to gain knowledge, reflect on myself, and set goals to achieve in the future.

Sugestão: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰且不够正式。建议使用正确的时态和更具体的职业规划描述。

Exemplo: In the future, I plan to continue my studies and, after graduation, find a job related to my major. I hope to be successful in my career and achieve financial stability.

× Because I'm a student so I just stay in school and learn my specific knowledge and review my lessons.

✓ Because I'm a student, I just stay in school to learn my specific knowledge and review my lessons.

句子中同时使用了Because和so，造成结构重复，应去掉so，使句子结构更清晰。

× Yes, school is a good place for me to study because it creates A suitable atmosphere that can bury yourself to the world of knowledge, and this atmosphere is so peaceful that you will not distract for anything.

✓ Yes, school is a good place for me to study because it creates a suitable atmosphere that can immerse you in the world of knowledge, and this atmosphere is so peaceful that you will not be distracted by anything.

冠词A应为小写a；动词bury用法错误，应使用immerse；反身代词yourself用法不当，应使用you；短语distract for anything错误，应为be distracted by anything。

× Yes, I like the place where I study. The university, I think is a very perfect place for you to receive knowledge and think about yourself, to set up a goal to achieve it.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I study. I think the university is a perfect place for you to gain knowledge, reflect on yourself, and set goals to achieve them.

句子结构不顺畅，逗号使用不当，且表达不够自然，需调整语序和用词，使句子更通顺。

× My future work plans is I will continue my studying and after my graduate I will look for a job related to my major and I want to become a billionaire because you know.

✓ My future work plans are that I will continue my studies, and after I graduate, I will look for a job related to my major, and I want to become a billionaire because you know.

主语plans为复数，谓语动词应使用are；studying应改为复数名词studies；after my graduate应改为after I graduate，动词形式错误。