Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating words. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I am currently working as an office administrative assistant, a position I've held for the past two years. Additionally, I am a part-time student studying personal sports training, which I started last year.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains errors in vocabulary and grammar. Use precise terms and correct grammar to explain your job clearly. Also, avoid repeating the same word incorrectly and try to use linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: I work in the tax department of an office, where we assist clients in filing their tax returns accurately and on time.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, try to avoid awkward phrasing and be more specific about the benefits.

Exemplo: Yes, it's an excellent place to work because the staff are very cooperative and always ready to help when I face any problems. Moreover, the company offers annual promotions based on performance, which motivates me to do my best.

Sugestão: Your answer covers good points but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and improve sentence structure for clarity and naturalness.

Exemplo: Yes, I like my workplace mainly because of its friendly atmosphere. Additionally, the office infrastructure is well organized, which allows us to work efficiently without any hassle.

Sugestão: Your answer contains important information but has grammatical errors and repetition. Use correct article usage and sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Currently, I am pursuing a Bachelor's degree in Education. In the future, I plan to become a certified teacher in Ontario, so I am preparing for the teaching certification exam.

× Actually I involved in both both activities I'm working as a office administrative assistant.

✓ Actually I am involved in both activities. I'm working as an office administrative assistant.

The verb 'involved' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'am involved'. Also, 'both' was repeated unnecessarily. 'a office' should be 'an office' because 'office' starts with a vowel sound.

× I have been working from last two years.

✓ I have been working for the last two years.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'for' is used to indicate duration. Also, 'the' is needed before 'last two years' to specify the time period.

× On the other side, I'm also a part time student of personal sport workers.

✓ On the other hand, I'm also a part-time student of personal sport workers.

'On the other side' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'On the other hand' to contrast ideas. Also, 'part time' should be hyphenated as 'part-time' when used as an adjective.

× Last year I started this study.

✓ Last year I started this course of study.

'Study' as a noun is uncountable and usually requires a modifier; 'course of study' is more appropriate. The past tense 'started' is correct here.

× I am working in the office which helps to file the text of the clients and it's a form of text department.

✓ I am working in an office which helps clients file their taxes; it's a form of tax department.

'a office' should be 'an office' due to vowel sound. 'helps to file the text of the clients' is incorrect; it should be 'helps clients file their taxes'. 'text' is a typo for 'tax'. Also, 'tax department' is the correct term.

× It helps the clients to file the tax.

✓ It helps clients file their taxes.

The phrase 'helps the clients to file the tax' is awkward; 'helps clients file their taxes' is more natural and correct. 'Tax' should be plural 'taxes' when referring generally.

× Firstly, staff of that place is very cooperative and it helps to solve the matter if I face any problem.

✓ Firstly, the staff at that place are very cooperative and they help solve any problems I face.

'Staff' is a collective noun and takes plural verb 'are'. 'It' is incorrect pronoun here; 'they' refers to 'staff'. 'Helps to solve the matter' is awkward; 'help solve any problems' is better.

× In addition to this, this company helps us to get the promotions on annually basis, on the performance basis.

✓ In addition, this company helps us get promotions on an annual basis, based on performance.

'In addition to this' can be simplified to 'In addition'. 'Helps us to get' can be 'helps us get'. 'On annually basis' should be 'on an annual basis'. 'On the performance basis' should be 'based on performance'.

× Yes, I like the place where I work. The main reason of liking it it's the atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work. The main reason I like it is the atmosphere.

'The main reason of liking it it's the atmosphere' is ungrammatical. Correct form is 'The main reason I like it is the atmosphere'.

× The working atmosphere of the of the office is very friendly and on the other side it's the infrastructure.

✓ The working atmosphere of the office is very friendly and on the other hand, there's the infrastructure.

'On the other side' is incorrect; 'on the other hand' is the correct phrase. Also, 'of the of the' is a repetition error.

× The infrastructure of the office is well organized and we can perform the work hassle free.

✓ The infrastructure of the office is well organized and we can perform our work hassle-free.

'Perform the work' is less natural than 'perform our work'. 'Hassle free' should be hyphenated as 'hassle-free'.

× Nowadays I am pursuing a education in Bachelor's of Education.

✓ Nowadays I am pursuing an education in a Bachelor's of Education.

'a education' should be 'an education' because 'education' starts with a vowel sound. Also, 'a Bachelor's of Education' is more natural than just 'Bachelor's of Education'.

× So I am planning in future to get a certified teacher in the Ontario and for that I am preparing the test of the I am preparing test for the teaching certification.

✓ So I am planning in the future to become a certified teacher in Ontario, and for that, I am preparing for the teaching certification test.

'Planning in future' should be 'planning in the future'. 'Get a certified teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'become a certified teacher'. 'The Ontario' is incorrect; 'Ontario' does not need 'the'. The sentence was repetitive and needed restructuring for clarity.