Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh câu bị cắt ngang và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và hoàn thiện ý tưởng của bạn.

Exemplo: I am currently a fourth-year student at National Economic University in Vietnam, majoring in finance and banking. I chose this field because I am fascinated by how the financial system works and its significant impact on the economy. I hope to apply the knowledge I have gained to contribute to economic development in the future.

Sugestão: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, tránh để câu bị dang dở và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về công việc của bạn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: Although I am still a student, I work part-time as an English tutor. I usually visit my students' homes to help them improve their speaking and writing skills. This job is very rewarding because I can see their progress over time, which motivates me and helps me develop my teaching abilities.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về môi trường làm việc và cảm nhận của bạn.

Exemplo: I work part-time as a teaching assistant because I want to become a teacher in the future. It is a great place to work since I gain valuable experience and improve my teaching skills. Moreover, the environment is very friendly and supportive, which makes working there enjoyable and rewarding.

Sugestão: Bạn cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc, đồng thời cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn thích nơi làm việc.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy working as a teacher because I love interacting with my students and helping them develop their skills. The school has a lively and supportive environment, which makes my job engaging and motivating.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề, liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về kế hoạch tương lai của bạn.

Exemplo: In the future, I plan to pursue a career in digital marketing, which combines creativity and technology. I aim to gain more experience through internships and online courses, develop my skills further, and eventually work for a reputable company where I can contribute to successful marketing campaigns.

× I'm fascinated by how the final system work and its significant influence on the overall economy.

✓ I'm fascinated by how the financial system works and its significant influence on the overall economy.

The word 'final' is incorrect; it should be 'financial' to refer to the finance system. Also, 'system' is singular, so the verb should be 'works' to agree in number.

× Initially, I hope to apply the large knowledge I gained to help the.

✓ Initially, I hope to apply the extensive knowledge I have gained to help others.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Large knowledge' is not idiomatic; 'extensive knowledge' is better. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs an object like 'others' to complete the thought.

× I usually go to my students homes to help them improve their speaking and writing skills, which I feel very rewarding because I can see their progress over time.

✓ I usually go to my students' homes to help them improve their speaking and writing skills, which I find very rewarding because I can see their progress over time.

The possessive form 'students homes' should be 'students' homes' to indicate ownership. Also, 'feel very rewarding' is better expressed as 'find very rewarding' when referring to an experience.

× This experience not only motivates me but also helps me develop my.

✓ This experience not only motivates me but also helps me develop my skills.

The sentence is incomplete; it ends abruptly without specifying what is being developed. Adding 'skills' completes the sentence logically.

× I work part time as a teaching assistant because they want to become a teacher in the future.

✓ I work part time as a teaching assistant because I want to become a teacher in the future.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' to refer to the speaker.

× Also, the environment is very friendly and supportive, which makes it working with you enjoyable and rewarding.

✓ Also, the environment is very friendly and supportive, which makes working with you enjoyable and rewarding.

The phrase 'makes it working' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'makes working' without 'it'.

× Sure, I really enjoy working as a teacher because they would love interacting with my students and helping them develop my new skills.

✓ Sure, I really enjoy working as a teacher because I love interacting with my students and helping them develop their skills.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect; it should be 'I' to refer to the speaker. Also, 'develop my new skills' is incorrect; it should be 'develop their skills' as the students are the ones developing skills.

× The school where I teach has a lively and supportive environment which makes my job work engaging and motivating.

✓ The school where I teach has a lively and supportive environment which makes my job engaging and motivating.

The phrase 'makes my job work engaging' is incorrect. The correct form is 'makes my job engaging'.

× In the future, I plan to pursue a career in digital marketing business about creativity and technology, aim to gain more experience through internships and online course, develop my skills further and to lead the world for a relativable company where I can contribute to marketing campaigns.

✓ In the future, I plan to pursue a career in digital marketing, focusing on creativity and technology; aim to gain more experience through internships and online courses; develop my skills further; and lead the world for a reputable company where I can contribute to marketing campaigns.

The phrase 'digital marketing business about creativity and technology' is awkward; 'digital marketing, focusing on creativity and technology' is clearer. 'Online course' should be plural 'online courses'. 'Relativable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'reputable'. Also, the sentence is long and needs proper punctuation for clarity.