Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' to make your answer sound more confident and natural. Also, you can make your answer more effective by combining the information into one clear sentence without redundancy.

Exemplo: I have been working as an English teacher for three years.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes, such as 'I am mainly responsible'. Also, avoid redundancy by focusing on the main points.

Exemplo: I work at a large educational institution in Chengdu, where I mainly teach middle and high school students. I really enjoy helping them improve their language skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite long and contains some grammatical errors, such as 'great feedbacks' (should be 'great feedback'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'not only... but also' correctly, and try to make your sentences clearer and more concise.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because since I joined three years ago, I have not only improved my professional skills but also enhanced my English ability. Additionally, I have received positive feedback from my colleagues.

Sugestão: There is a grammatical error in 'where I am work now' which should be 'where I work now'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' effectively and avoid repeating 'really'. Make your answer more natural and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I like the place where I work now because my supervisor is talented in management and has helped me make significant progress in my work.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words like 'umm' to sound more confident. Use linking words like 'and' effectively and be more specific about the certifications you want to obtain to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: I want to improve both my management skills and English proficiency, so I plan to obtain advanced English certifications such as the Cambridge C1 or C2 in the near future.

× I mainly responsible for teaching students from middle school to high school.

✓ I am mainly responsible for teaching students from middle school to high school.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' to agree with the subject 'I'. In English, the subject and verb must agree, so 'I' requires the verb 'am' in this context to form the present continuous or present simple tense correctly.

× I have received many great feedbacks in my job.

✓ I have received much great feedback in my job.

The noun 'feedback' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralised as 'feedbacks'. Instead, use 'much' with uncountable nouns and keep 'feedback' singular.

× Yes, I like the place where I am work now because I think my supervisor is really talented in management and also she really helped me to make progress in my work.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work now because I think my supervisor is really talented in management and also she has really helped me to make progress in my work.

The phrase 'I am work' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I work' for present simple tense. Also, 'she really helped me' refers to past action, but since the help is relevant to the present, 'she has really helped me' (present perfect) is more appropriate.