Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答时应避免句子碎片，保持句子完整自然。例如，第二句应与第一句合并，避免单独使用原因句。

Exemplo: I am currently a student majoring in product design because I have a strong passion for drawing and creativity. This helps me combine my artistic skills with solving practical problems, which is a really fulfilling experience.

Sugestão: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。应使用正确时态和表达，避免语法错误。

Exemplo: Actually, I only have some part-time job experience that allows me to earn some pocket money. For example, I worked at a local restaurant where I washed dishes and helped prepare meals.

Sugestão: 回答中有词汇错误（walk应为work），句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. It's a good place for me to work because it is a very small restaurant, and the boss is quite nice. Moreover, the staff are very warm-hearted and helpful. I really enjoy working there because of the good atmosphere.

Sugestão: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“small and small”，主谓不一致。建议简洁表达并注意语法一致性。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I love my workplace. Although it's a small restaurant, it is really tidy and warm. The boss and staff are very nice and always patient in teaching me new things, so I really enjoy working there.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“in a big companies”，“due to I don't like changes”。建议使用正确的单复数形式和更自然的表达。

Exemplo: To be honest, I am planning to be a designer in a big company where I can work for a long time because I don't like frequent changes. I think the company will be a good place for me to combine my creativity with solving practical problems.

× Because I have a strong passion for drawing and creativity.

✓ I have a strong passion for drawing and creativity.

句子以连词“Because”开头，导致句子结构不完整，应该将其改为完整句子。

× This can help me combine my artistic skills with solving practical problems, which is really fulfilling experience.

✓ This can help me combine my artistic skills with solving practical problems, which is a really fulfilling experience.

缺少冠词“a”，导致名词短语不完整。

× For example, I want work at a local restaurant.

✓ For example, I want to work at a local restaurant.

动词“want”后应接不定式“to work”，缺少“to”导致用法错误。

× In that place I do some dish and help to prepare for the meal in there.

✓ In that place I wash some dishes and help to prepare the meal there.

“do some dish”表达不正确，应使用“wash some dishes”；“prepare for the meal”应为“prepare the meal”，去掉介词“for”。

× It's a good place for me to walk because it was a very small restaurant and the boss is quite nice and the staff is very warm hearted to help me.

✓ It's a good place for me to work because it is a very small restaurant and the boss is quite nice and the staff are very warm-hearted to help me.

“walk”应为“work”，动词用错；“was”改为“is”保持时态一致；“staff”作为集合名词，谓语动词用复数“are”；“warm hearted”应连写为“warm-hearted”。

× You know, I really enjoy work here because they have a good atmosphere.

✓ You know, I really enjoy working here because they have a good atmosphere.

动词“enjoy”后应接动名词“working”，而非动词原形“work”。

× Although it's a small and small restaurant but it's really tidy and warm place for me.

✓ Although it's a small restaurant, it's really a tidy and warm place for me.

“Although”和“but”不能同时使用，且“small and small”重复，应删除一个“small”，并调整句子结构。

× The boys and staff there was very nice to me and always be patient to teach me new things, so I really enjoy working there.

✓ The boys and staff there were very nice to me and always patient in teaching me new things, so I really enjoy working there.

主语“boys and staff”为复数，谓语动词应为“were”；“always be patient”表达不正确，应改为“always patient in teaching”。

× I am planning to be a designer in a big companies where I plan to work there all the time due to I don't like changes.

✓ I am planning to be a designer in a big company where I plan to work all the time because I don't like changes.

“a big companies”中“companies”为复数，前面冠词“a”应与单数名词“company”搭配；“due to”用法不当，应改为“because”；“work there all the time”中“there”多余。

× I think the company will be a good place for me to combine my creativity with practical problems solving.

✓ I think the company will be a good place for me to combine my creativity with practical problem solving.

“problems solving”应为“problem solving”，作为复合名词使用，去掉复数形式。