Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误，如“study”应为“studying”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的时态和表达。

Exemplo: I'm currently studying Psychology at Zhongshan Medical University in Taejong City. I transferred to this major in my second year after initially studying Applied Foreign Language.

Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“even a part time job”应为“not even a part-time job”，且句子较长且重复。建议使用更简洁的表达，并注意语法正确。

Exemplo: I'm not working at the moment, not even a part-time job, because I believe studying is my top priority. Therefore, I spend my time studying and doing things I enjoy, such as reading books and reviewing my lessons.

Sugestão: 回答不够直接且语法错误较多，如“they're professors is well done”不正确。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的语法和更具体的描述。

Exemplo: I haven't worked yet, but as a student, I think Zhongshan Medical University is a great place to study because the professors are knowledgeable and the facilities are comfortable.

Sugestão: 回答中有自我纠正，显得不够流畅。建议直接回答问题，避免重复“comfortable”，并丰富细节使回答更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, I like the place where I study. The environment is comfortable, and the professors are friendly, which helps me learn a lot about psychology and mental health.

Sugestão: 回答表达了未来计划，但语法和用词有误，如“an exact plans”应为“exact plans”，且句子较长。建议简化句子，注意语法，并更具体描述未来目标。

Exemplo: To be honest, I don't have exact plans yet, but I hope to study for my master's degree in England. After that, I want to return to Taiwan and find a good job with supportive colleagues where I can continue learning.

× I'm currently a student study in Zhongshan Medical University in Taejong City, majoring in Psychology.

✓ I'm currently a student studying at Zhongshan Medical University in Taejong City, majoring in Psychology.

这里'student study'中，'study'应为动名词形式'studying'，表示正在进行的动作。同时，'in Zhongshan Medical University'应改为'at Zhongshan Medical University'，因为通常用'at'表示在某个学校学习。

× I'm currently a student study in Zhongshan Medical University in Taejong City, majoring in Psychology.

✓ I'm currently a student studying at Zhongshan Medical University in Taejong City, majoring in Psychology.

介词'in'用于表示城市或国家，表示学校时应使用'at'，所以应改为'at Zhongshan Medical University'。

× I transferred to Psychology department in my second year and before I was studying in the Department of Applied Foreign Language.

✓ I transferred to the Psychology department in my second year, and before that, I was studying in the Department of Applied Foreign Language.

'Psychology department'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特指某个系。句子中缺少连接词'and before that'使句子更连贯。

× I transferred to Psychology department in my second year and before I was studying in the Department of Applied Foreign Language.

✓ I transferred to the Psychology department in my second year, and before that, I was studying in the Department of Applied Foreign Language.

'in my second year'正确，'before'后应加'that'或用逗号分隔，表示时间顺序。

× I'm not working right now, even a part time job because I think being a student the most important thing is to study.

✓ I'm not working right now, not even a part-time job, because I think being a student is the most important thing, and I should study.

'even a part time job'前应加'not'表示否定，'part time'应连写为'part-time'，句子缺少'is'连接主语和表语。

× I'm not working right now, even a part time job because I think being a student the most important thing is to study.

✓ I'm not working right now, not even a part-time job, because I think being a student is the most important thing, and I should study.

句子结构不完整，缺少否定词和连接词，导致表达不清晰。

× So I spent time on studying and doing things I like, like reading more books or review more.

✓ So I spend time studying and doing things I like, like reading more books or reviewing more.

'spend time on studying'应改为'spend time studying'，'review'应改为动名词'reviewing'，保持形式一致。

× So I spent time on studying and doing things I like, like reading more books or review more.

✓ So I spend time studying and doing things I like, like reading more books or reviewing more.

前文为现在时态，'spent'应改为现在时'spend'，保持时态一致。

× Umm, like what I said and the last question that I haven't had at work.

✓ Umm, like I said in the last question, I haven't had a job yet.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，表达不完整，应调整为完整句子。

× So about studying, I think Joshua Medical University is a good place to study because they're professors is well done and the chair are comfortable and everything is fine and OK.

✓ So about studying, I think Zhongshan Medical University is a good place to study because their professors are good, the chairs are comfortable, and everything is fine and OK.

'they're professors is'应改为'their professors are'，主谓一致错误；'chair are'应改为'chairs are'，单复数错误。

× because they're professors is well done and the chair are comfortable

✓ because their professors are good and the chairs are comfortable

'professors'为复数，谓语动词应为'are'，'chair'应为复数'chairs'，谓语动词也应为'are'，保持主谓一致。

× Yes, I would say I like the place where I work. Oh, not work and it's more like studying.

✓ Yes, I would say I like the place where I study. Oh, not work, it's more like studying.

'where I work'与上下文不符，应改为'where I study'，代词使用错误。

× I think it's comfortable. The place is comfortable. The professors are nice, so I can really learn a lot about psychology and mental health problems.

✓ I think it's comfortable. The place is comfortable. The professors are nice, so I can really learn a lot about psychology and mental health problems.

该句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× To be honest, I'm not really having an exact plans for my future work, but I hope I can study abroad in England to complete my masters degree and then come back to Taiwan and have a really nice job which have really good colleagues and something I can learn.

✓ To be honest, I don't really have exact plans for my future work, but I hope I can study abroad in England to complete my master's degree and then come back to Taiwan and have a really nice job which has really good colleagues and offers something I can learn from.

'I'm not really having'应改为一般现在时'don't really have'，'masters degree'应为'master's degree'，'which have'应为'which has'，保持主谓一致。