Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and effective by adding a linking phrase and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of 'Currently, I am working as a special educator in an organization where I train students with special needs,' you could say, 'At present, I work as a special educator at an organization that trains students with special needs.' This sounds more fluent and concise.

Exemplo: At present, I work as a special educator at an organization that trains students with special needs.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks coherence and contains some errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'pain' should be 'painting'). Also, avoid repeating 'I am working' and use simple present tense for routines. For example, 'I work at a vocational institute that mainly focuses on improving students' communication skills and daily living activities. Additionally, I train them in basic computer skills and vocational courses like painting.'

Exemplo: I work at a vocational institute that mainly focuses on improving students' communication skills and daily living activities. Additionally, I train them in basic computer skills and vocational courses like painting.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrases like 'my all cliques.' Use correct terms such as 'colleagues' and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words for coherence. For example, 'Definitely, my workplace is very comfortable because my colleagues and manager are considerate and helpful. Moreover, the environment is soothing, which helps me work efficiently.'

Exemplo: Definitely, my workplace is very comfortable because my colleagues and manager are considerate and helpful. Moreover, the environment is soothing, which helps me work efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats previous points and has awkward phrasing like 'calm as peaceful' and 'throughout the world.' Try to avoid repetition and use clearer expressions. For example, 'Yes, I like my workplace because my colleagues and manager are very supportive. Furthermore, the calm and peaceful environment helps me stay focused and productive throughout the day.'

Exemplo: Yes, I like my workplace because my colleagues and manager are very supportive. Furthermore, the calm and peaceful environment helps me stay focused and productive throughout the day.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors such as 'as much people' and 'ADHD children's.' Use correct expressions and linking words to improve clarity. For example, 'Well, I aim to become a specialist in my profession so that I can help as many people as possible. Specifically, my main goal is to gain expertise in training children with ADHD who have difficulty concentrating.'

Exemplo: Well, I aim to become a specialist in my profession so that I can help as many people as possible. Specifically, my main goal is to gain expertise in training children with ADHD who have difficulty concentrating.

× It majorly aims on improving their communication abilities and activities of daily living.

✓ It majorly aims at improving their communication abilities and activities of daily living.

The correct preposition to use with 'aims' in this context is 'at', not 'on'. So, 'aims at improving' is the proper phrase.

× Apart from this I train them in computer basics and some vocational training like pain.

✓ Apart from this I train them in computer basics and some vocational training like painting.

The word 'pain' is incorrect here; it should be 'painting', which is a vocational training subject. This is a vocabulary correction related to plural and singular noun usage.

× Definitely my working place is very comfortable to me as my all cliques and my manager is quite considerate and helpful.

✓ Definitely my workplace is very comfortable to me as all my colleagues and my manager are quite considerate and helpful.

'Working place' should be 'workplace' as one word. 'Cliques' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'colleagues'. Also, 'my all cliques' is incorrect word order; it should be 'all my colleagues'. Additionally, 'manager is' should be 'manager are' if referring to multiple people, but since 'manager' is singular, 'is' is correct. However, 'all my colleagues and my manager' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'.

× Apart from this, the environment is calm as peaceful which helps me stay focused and efficient throughout the world.

✓ Apart from this, the environment is calm and peaceful which helps me stay focused and efficient throughout the work.

The phrase 'calm as peaceful' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'and' to join two adjectives. Also, 'throughout the world' is likely a mistake; it should be 'throughout the work' or 'throughout the day' depending on context.

× Well, I'm aiming to become a specialist in my profession so that I can help as much people as I can.

✓ Well, I'm aiming to become a specialist in my profession so that I can help as many people as I can.

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'many' is used with countable nouns like 'people'. Therefore, 'as many people as I can' is correct.

× The major goal is to gain expertise in training ADHD children's who find difficulty in concentration.

✓ The major goal is to gain expertise in training ADHD children who find difficulty in concentration.

The word 'children's' is possessive and incorrect here; the plural noun 'children' should be used without an apostrophe.