Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer wa chotto nagai desu ne. Motto kantan ni shite, jiko shoukai to shite, "I graduated with a Doctor of Nursing Practice degree in March and will start working at a hospital in September. Currently, I am in a gap period." to iu hou ga natural de wakari yasui desu. Mata, 'gap period' no imi wo mou sukoshi setsumei suru to yori rikai shiyasui desu.

Exemplo: I graduated with a Doctor of Nursing Practice degree in March, and I will start working at a hospital in September. Currently, I am taking a gap period to prepare for my new job.

Sugestão: Answer wa yoku setsumei sarete imasu ga, 'sense of purposes' wa 'sense of purpose' ga tadashii desu. Mata, 'Although' no ato ni wa, 'but' to iu imi no kotoba wo tsukau to, motto rikai shi yasui desu. Tatoeba, "Although it is a fast-paced and high-pressure environment, I find it very rewarding and it gives me a sense of purpose." to iu fuu ni shimasu.

Exemplo: I'm going to start working at the Mary Bridge Children's Hospital Emergency Department in Tacoma, which is a level 2 pediatric trauma center. Although it is a fast-paced and high-pressure environment, I find it very rewarding and it gives me a sense of purpose.

Sugestão: Answer ni wa chotto fukuzatsu na hyougen ga arimasu. 'Not a great good place' wa 'not a very good place' to iu hou ga natural desu. Soshite, '3 * 3 night shift per week' wa wakari nikui node, 'three night shifts per week' to shite kudasai. Mata, 'night shifts affects' wa 'night shifts affect' ga tadashii desu. Kono you na shousai ni chuumoku shite kudasai.

Exemplo: It is not a very good place to work mainly because of the night shifts. I have to do three night shifts per week, which affect my sleeping pattern, so I sometimes feel fatigued and exhausted.

Sugestão: Answer ni wa ikutsuka no eigo no machigai ga arimasu. 'mass practitioner' wa 'nurse practitioner' no koto desu. 'If I were born again, I would do the same life' wa 'If I were born again, I would choose the same career' to iu hou ga natural desu. Soshite, 'they always support' wa 'they always support me' to shite kudasai. Kono you ni, motto seikaku na hyougen wo tsukatte kudasai.

Exemplo: Yes, I like my workplace. First of all, working as a nurse practitioner has been my dream, so this is my dream come true. If I were born again, I would choose the same career. Also, I like the people around me at the hospital because they always support me.

Sugestão: Answer wa yoku setsumei sarete imasu ga, 'obtain PhD degree' wa 'obtain a PhD degree' to shite kudasai. Soshite, 'I don't know how to change the system' wa chotto fukuzatsu na hyougen desu node, 'I want to learn how to change the system' to iu hou ga yoku wakarimasu. Motto seikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

Exemplo: My next step is to obtain a PhD degree. Although I have a Doctor of Nursing Practice degree, I want to learn how to change the healthcare system. As a nurse practitioner, I've seen some people marginalized and isolated, so I want to make the system more available and affordable.

× Although it is fast-paced, high pressure environment, I find it very rewarding and gives me a sense of purposes.

✓ Although it is a fast-paced, high-pressure environment, I find it very rewarding and it gives me a sense of purpose.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'fast-paced, high-pressure environment' because it refers to a singular countable noun. Also, 'high pressure' should be hyphenated as 'high-pressure' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. 'Gives me a sense of purposes' is incorrect because 'purposes' should be singular 'purpose' in this context, and the sentence needs the subject 'it' before 'gives' to be grammatically correct.

× It is not a great good place to work, mainly because of night shifts.

✓ It is not a great place to work, mainly because of night shifts.

The phrase 'great good' is redundant; only one adjective is needed. 'Great' alone suffices to express the meaning. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And night shifts affects your sleeping pattern, so I sometimes feel fatigued and exhausted.

✓ And night shifts affect your sleeping pattern, so I sometimes feel fatigued and exhausted.

The subject 'night shifts' is plural, so the verb should be 'affect' (plural form) instead of 'affects' (singular form). This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× If I were born again, I would do the same life.

✓ If I were born again, I would live the same life.

The verb 'do' is incorrect with 'life'; the correct verb is 'live' when referring to experiencing or going through a life. This is an incorrect verb usage with pronouns and expressions.

× Second of all, I like people around me in my hospital, they always support.

✓ Second of all, I like the people around me in my hospital; they always support me.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'people' to specify a particular group. Also, the pronoun 'they' should be followed by an object 'me' to complete the verb 'support'. The original sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× My next step would be to obtain PhD degree.

✓ My next step would be to obtain a PhD degree.

The noun phrase 'PhD degree' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun. Omitting the article is incorrect.

× As a nurse practitioner, I've seen some people marginalized and isolated, so I want to make the system available and affordable.

✓ As a nurse practitioner, I've seen some people marginalized and isolated, so I want to make the system more available and affordable.

The sentence lacks the comparative adverb 'more' before 'available and affordable' to indicate improvement or change. Adding 'more' clarifies the intended meaning.