Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is informative but could be more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure, for example, use 'I work as an Assistant Managing Director at my brother's real estate company, Asra Homes, where I mainly handle sales and client relationships.'

Exemplo: I work as an Assistant Managing Director at my brother's real estate company, Asra Homes, where I mainly handle sales and client relationships.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats information from the previous question and has minor grammatical errors. Try to combine information smoothly and correct article usage, for example, 'I work in Gurgaon at Asra Homes, a real estate company, where I am the Assistant Managing Director.'

Exemplo: I work in Gurgaon at Asra Homes, a real estate company, where I am the Assistant Managing Director.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and varied in vocabulary. Instead of repeating 'very,' try 'The workplace is clean and peaceful, creating a relaxing atmosphere.' Also, add a linking phrase to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. The workplace is clean and peaceful, which creates a relaxing atmosphere that makes it enjoyable to work there.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise and fluent. Avoid filler words like 'like' and use linking words to connect ideas, for example, 'Yes, I love working there because I have many friends at the company, and real estate is one of my passions.'

Exemplo: Yes, I love working there because I have many friends at the company, and real estate is one of my passions.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more polished and connected. Use linking words and avoid short, choppy sentences. For example, 'In the future, I hope to advance to a higher position within the same company and increase my earnings significantly.'

Exemplo: In the future, I hope to advance to a higher position within the same company and increase my earnings significantly.

× I worked as there as a assistant managing director.

✓ I worked there as an assistant managing director.

The sentence has a past tense verb 'worked' which is correct, but the phrase 'as there as a assistant' is incorrect. 'There' is unnecessary and 'a assistant' should be 'an assistant' because 'assistant' starts with a vowel sound. The correct sentence is 'I worked there as an assistant managing director.'

× I work there as a Assistant Managing director.

✓ I work there as an Assistant Managing Director.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'Assistant'. Also, job titles should be capitalized consistently: 'Assistant Managing Director'.

× the workplace is very clean and calming and the atmosphere around the work is very relaxing.

✓ the workplace is very clean and calm and the atmosphere around the work is very relaxing.

The adjective 'calming' describes something that causes calm, but here the workplace itself is being described, so 'calm' is more appropriate. 'Calming' is a participle form used to describe something that causes calm, while 'calm' is an adjective describing a state.

× I love like the place where I work.

✓ I love the place where I work.

The phrase 'love like' is incorrect because 'love' and 'like' are both verbs expressing positive feelings and should not be used together. The correct expression is simply 'I love the place where I work.'

× Well, in the future I would like to work for the same company, definitely on a higher level.

✓ Well, in the future I would like to work for the same company, definitely at a higher level.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to levels in a company. The correct preposition is 'at' to indicate position or level within an organization.