Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「studied about physics」は不自然で、「studying physics」が適切です。また、過去形と現在形の混在に注意し、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。

Exemplo: I am a university student studying physics. Initially, I wanted to study biology, but I gave up because it involved a lot of memorization.

Sugestão: 「I work at the Osaka University」は不自然で、「I study at Osaka University」や「I work at Osaka University」など、冠詞の使い方に注意が必要です。また、「go cities in Osaka」は文法的に誤りで、「go to cities in Osaka」が正しいです。文をより自然にするために、詳細を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Exemplo: I work at Osaka University, which is located in the northern part of Osaka. Its location is convenient because we can easily visit various cities in Osaka.

Sugestão: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I also got university provides me」は不自然で、「The university provides me with」など正しい表現を使う必要があります。内容を明確にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げることが重要です。

Exemplo: Yes, the university provides comfortable places to work. For example, there are many laboratories and classrooms, so we can study anytime and anywhere on campus. I find this very valuable.

Sugestão: 「the place I walk」は誤りで、「the place I work」が正しいです。また、「culture difference」は「cultural differences」が適切です。文法と語彙の誤りを修正し、より具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I like the place where I work because many people come from abroad. By talking with them, I can learn about cultural differences between countries.

Sugestão: 「our goals」ではなく「my goal」が適切です。また、「study English hard about 14 hours a day」は不自然で、「study English hard for about 14 hours a day」が正しいです。文法と語彙の使い方を改善し、より自然な表現を心がけましょう。

Exemplo: In the future, I want to work abroad to understand cultural differences between countries. To achieve this goal, I study English hard for about 14 hours a day at the university library with my friend, who also wants to work abroad.

× I am a university student and I studied about physics at my university.

✓ I am a university student and I study physics at my university.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the student is currently a university student, the present tense 'study' should be used instead of past tense 'studied'.

× At first I wanted to study biology but give up because this field involved a lot of memorization.

✓ At first I wanted to study biology but gave up because this field involved a lot of memorization.

The verb 'give up' should be in the past tense 'gave up' to match the past tense context of the sentence.

× I work at the Osaka University which is located on the northern part of Osaka.

✓ I work at Osaka University which is located in the northern part of Osaka.

The preposition 'in' is correct to indicate location within an area, while 'on' is incorrect here.

× I think it's location is useful because we can go cities in Osaka.

✓ I think its location is useful because we can go to cities in Osaka.

The possessive pronoun 'its' should not have an apostrophe. Also, the verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before 'cities'.

× Yes, I also got university provides me comfortable places to work.

✓ Yes, the university also provides me with comfortable places to work.

The phrase 'I also got university' is incorrect. It should be 'the university also provides me with'. The preposition 'with' is necessary after 'provides me'. Also, 'got' is incorrect here.

× For example, there are many laboratories and classrooms, so we can study anytime, anywhere at the university.

✓ For example, there are many laboratories and classrooms, so we can study anytime, anywhere in the university.

The preposition 'in' is more appropriate than 'at' when referring to locations within a university.

× Yes, I like the place I walk because there are a lot of people who come from abroad.

✓ Yes, I like the place I work because there are a lot of people who come from abroad.

The word 'walk' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'work' to match the question about the workplace.

× By talking with others, we can understand the culture difference between countries.

✓ By talking with others, we can understand the cultural differences between countries.

The adjective 'cultural' is needed instead of 'culture' to modify 'differences'. Also, 'differences' should be plural.

× In order to achieve our goals, I study English hard about 14 hours a day at university library with my friend who also work abroad.

✓ In order to achieve my goals, I study English hard for about 14 hours a day at the university library with my friend who also works abroad.

The pronoun 'our' should be 'my' to match the singular subject 'I'. The preposition 'for' is needed before 'about 14 hours'. 'University library' requires the definite article 'the'. The verb 'work' should be 'works' to agree with singular 'friend'.