Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为直接，但句子结构稍显简单，缺少连接词和细节描述。建议在回答中加入更多细节，并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

Exemplo: I am currently a university student in Shanghai, majoring in International Economics and Trade, which I find very interesting because it combines both economic theory and practical business skills.

Sugestão: 回答虽然表达了事实，但句子结构不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

Exemplo: I don't have a job at the moment since I am still a university student focusing on my studies.

Sugestão: 回答显得有些回避问题，缺乏内容。建议尝试从学习环境角度回答，展示积极态度。

Exemplo: Although I don't have a job yet, I believe that any workplace with supportive colleagues and good management would be a good place to work.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议注意语法，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I really like my university because the teachers are very dedicated and always try their best to help us learn, and my classmates are friendly, which creates a positive learning environment.

Sugestão: 回答内容较具体，但表达稍显简单，缺少连接词和更丰富的细节。建议增加连接词和具体描述，使回答更完整。

Exemplo: In the future, I plan to become an international trader because I am interested in working with people from different countries, following international trade regulations, and negotiating deals to benefit all parties involved.

× I am a student from university in Shanghai, majoring in the International Economics and Trade.

✓ I am a student from a university in Shanghai, majoring in International Economics and Trade.

这里缺少不定冠词“a”，因为“university”是可数名词，表示某一所大学，前面需要加冠词。此外，“the International Economics and Trade”中的“the”不合适，专业名称一般不加冠词。

× Because I'm just a student from university so I don't work.

✓ Because I'm just a student from university, I don't work.

句子中同时使用了连词“Because”和“so”，造成结构重复，应去掉“so”或调整句子结构。

× I'd like the place where I study. The place where I study has a good teachers who try try best to help us to learn lessons and the classmates are very friendly as well.

✓ I'd like the place where I study. The place where I study has good teachers who try their best to help us learn lessons, and the classmates are very friendly as well.

“a good teachers”中“teachers”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。“try try best”重复，应为“try their best”。“help us to learn lessons”中“to”可省略。

× The place where I study has a good teachers who try try best to help us to learn lessons and the classmates are very friendly as well.

✓ The place where I study has good teachers who try their best to help us learn lessons, and the classmates are very friendly as well.

“try try best”重复，应为“try their best”。“help us to learn”中“to”可省略，动词后接动词原形。

× I am a student from university in Shanghai, majoring in the International Economics and Trade.

✓ I am a student from a university in Shanghai, majoring in International Economics and Trade.

“the International Economics and Trade”中的“the”不合适，专业名称一般不加冠词。

× I want to trade with people from all over the world with international rules and make a bargain with them as well.

✓ I want to trade with people from all over the world following international rules and make bargains with them as well.

“make a bargain”通常用复数“make bargains”，表示多次交易。这里“with international rules”用“following international rules”更自然。