Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, stating your current status and relevant background in a natural way. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Exemplo: I have been working in Saudi Arabia for nine years since I left the Philippines. This is my first job here.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but is somewhat unclear and ends abruptly. Use linking words to connect ideas and clarify your role and the hospital's specialty. Avoid incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I work as a charge nurse at El Moussa Health Hospital, where we specialise in treating infertility cases for patients who have difficulty conceiving.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct plural forms and linking words to improve coherence. Be more specific about why the workplace is good.

Exemplo: I think it is a good place to work because the people are friendly, and the management is very supportive. For example, the employer often treats us to different kinds of food outside work.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I love working there because my colleagues are very supportive, and my manager is kind. We treat each other like family, which creates a strong team spirit.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your future plans clearly and use complete sentences with appropriate linking words. Avoid vague phrases and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Exemplo: My future plan is to settle in America so that I can have a stable retirement with a regular monthly allowance.

× I have been working US and raised here in Saudi for nine years.

✓ I have been working in the US and have been living here in Saudi Arabia for nine years.

The preposition 'in' is required before 'US' to indicate location. Also, 'raised here' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have been living here' to express duration of residence.

× This is my first job when I left the Philippines.

✓ This was my first job when I left the Philippines.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb 'is' should be in the past tense 'was' to maintain tense consistency.

× I am currently working in El Moussa Health Hospital as a charge nurse where we handle infertility cases which they cannot produce or they cannot get pregnant.

✓ I am currently working at El Moussa Health Hospital as a charge nurse where we handle infertility cases where patients cannot conceive or get pregnant.

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate for institutions like hospitals. Also, 'which they cannot produce' is incorrect; 'patients cannot conceive' is the correct expression.

× So what we have?

✓ So, what do we have?

The original sentence lacks auxiliary verb 'do' for question formation and proper word order; the corrected sentence follows standard question structure.

× The employer usually treat us with the different kinds of foods outside.

✓ The employer usually treats us with different kinds of food outside.

The singular subject 'employer' requires the verb 'treats' with an 's'. Also, 'foods' is generally uncountable; 'food' is preferred.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

The question 'Would you like' implies preference or desire, but the intended meaning is to ask about current opinion, so 'Do you like' is more appropriate.

× My future plans are to settle to America so that my future or retirement this will be much stable which I can receive monthly allow once and also.

✓ My future plans are to settle in America so that my future retirement will be more stable and I can receive a monthly allowance.

The correct preposition is 'in' for settling in a country. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness, including 'allowance' instead of 'allow once'.