Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp hơn. Ví dụ, thay vì 'I'm really in char' nên nói 'I'm really in charge' và 'it's give me the change' nên là 'it gives me the chance'.

Exemplo: I'm currently working as a corporate lawyer at a fintech company in Ho Chi Minh City. My main responsibility is handling legal contracts and ensuring compliance. I'm really enjoying my job because it gives me the chance to sharpen my knowledge in this field.

Sugestão: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, đồng thời câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lỗi phát âm và dùng từ không chính xác như 'The Azure' hay 'edge bangs'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

Exemplo: I work in Ho Chi Minh City, and my office is located in District 1, the city's business center. The location is very convenient because it's close to many facilities such as banks and restaurants. This makes it easier for me to attend meetings and run errands.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'depends on person perspective' nên là 'depends on a person's perspective'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: Whether it's a good place to work depends on a person's perspective, but for me, it is. I have very friendly and nice coworkers, and the company also gives me many opportunities to develop myself outside of work.

Sugestão: Bạn cần sửa lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác như 'asthma fee' và 'improve must give'. Hãy dùng từ phù hợp và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn với liên từ để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: Yes, I really like the place where I work because the environment is very positive and friendly. This kind of atmosphere motivates me to do my best and improve myself every day.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm, ví dụ 'our several years' nên là 'for several years', 'Anne' nên là 'And', 'chain' nên là 'chance'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: My future work plan is to continue working at this company for several years. I would like to sharpen my skills and deepen my knowledge in the industry first. And if given a chance, I would like to take on a higher position to improve my leadership skills.

× My main responsibility is to handle legal contract documents an order compliance issue for the company.

✓ My main responsibility is to handle legal contract documents and order compliance issues for the company.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'an' instead of 'and' to connect two objects, and 'issue' should be plural 'issues' to match the context. Correct conjunction and plural form improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I'm really in char working at the company right now because it's give me the change to sharpen my knowledge in this into.

✓ I'm really in charge working at the company right now because it gives me the chance to sharpen my knowledge in this area.

The phrase 'in char' should be 'in charge'. 'It's give' should be 'it gives' to agree with the singular subject. 'Change' should be 'chance', and 'into' should be 'area' to make sense. These corrections fix spelling and verb agreement errors.

× I worked here in Ho Chi Minh City.

✓ I work here in Ho Chi Minh City.

The question asks about current work, so present tense 'work' is appropriate instead of past tense 'worked'.

× The Azure is very convenient because it's close to main facility so edge bangs or swapping more restaurant.

✓ The area is very convenient because it's close to main facilities such as banks, shopping malls, and restaurants.

'Azure' is likely a typo for 'area'. 'Main facility' should be plural 'main facilities'. 'So edge bangs or swapping more restaurant' is unclear and corrected to 'such as banks, shopping malls, and restaurants' to convey intended meaning.

× This location is easier for me to meet an attending.

✓ This location makes it easier for me to meet and attend meetings.

The phrase 'meet an attending' is incorrect. It should be 'meet and attend meetings' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× This matter will depends on person perspective, but to me this is a good workplace.

✓ This matter depends on a person's perspective, but to me this is a good workplace.

'Will depends' is incorrect; 'depends' is sufficient. 'Person perspective' needs the possessive form 'a person's perspective'.

× I have very friend, friendly and nice coworker and the company also give me many opportunity to developing myself outside of the workplace.

✓ I have very friendly and nice coworkers, and the company also gives me many opportunities to develop myself outside of the workplace.

'Very friend' should be 'very friendly'. 'Coworker' should be plural 'coworkers'. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'company'. 'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities'. 'To developing' should be 'to develop'.

× Yes, I really like the place where I work because the environment is very positive and friendly.

✓ Yes, I really like the place where I work because the environment is very positive and friendly.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× This kind of asthma fee motivates me to do my best and improve must give every day.

✓ This kind of atmosphere motivates me to do my best and improve myself every day.

'Asthma fee' is a mishearing or typo for 'atmosphere'. 'Must give' should be 'myself'. The corrected sentence conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× My future work plans is to continue working as this company for our several years.

✓ My future work plans are to continue working at this company for several years.

'Plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'As this company' should be 'at this company'. 'Our several years' should be 'several years'.

× I would like to sharpen my skill and deepen my knowledge in the industry first.

✓ I would like to sharpen my skills and deepen my knowledge in the industry first.

'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context.

× Anne, if given a chain, I would like to take on higher position to improve leadership.

✓ And, if given a chance, I would like to take on a higher position to improve my leadership.

'Anne' should be 'And'. 'Chain' should be 'chance'. 'Higher position' needs the article 'a'. 'Improve leadership' should be 'improve my leadership' for clarity.