Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper tenses and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and clarify your role clearly. For example, say "I have been working as a physical therapy assistant for three and a half years because I am preparing to get my physiotherapy license."

Exemplo: I have been working as a physical therapy assistant for three and a half years because I am preparing to get my physiotherapy license.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by correcting grammar and providing specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I work at a clinic called Physio Zone. I have been working there for three years, and during this time, I have learned many skills from the physiotherapists."

Exemplo: I work at a clinic called Physio Zone. I have been working there for three years, and during this time, I have learned many skills from the physiotherapists.

Sugestão: Improve fluency and clarity by forming complete sentences and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to explain why it is a good place. For example, "Yes, it is a good place to work because my colleagues provide a supportive and peaceful working atmosphere, so I can focus well."

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work because my colleagues provide a supportive and peaceful working atmosphere, so I can focus well.

Sugestão: Clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases. Use complete sentences and explain your feelings clearly. For example, "Yes, I love the place where I work because becoming a physiotherapist has always been my dream. I am happy to finally work in a physio clinic where I can fully apply my skills."

Exemplo: Yes, I love the place where I work because becoming a physiotherapist has always been my dream. I am happy to finally work in a physio clinic where I can fully apply my skills.

Sugestão: Make your answer more structured and clear by using proper grammar and linking words. Provide specific details about your plans. For example, "I don't have specific plans yet, but I hope to start my own physiotherapy clinic near where I live because there are few clinics in that area."

Exemplo: I don't have specific plans yet, but I hope to start my own physiotherapy clinic near where I live because there are few clinics in that area.

× I'm working since 3:00 and half years and currently I'm working as a physical therapy assistant here because I need to clear my physio license so I'm working on that.

✓ I've been working since 3:00 and for half a year, and currently I'm working as a physical therapy assistant here because I need to clear my physio license, so I'm working on that.

The phrase 'I'm working since' is incorrect because 'since' requires the present perfect continuous tense to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. The correct form is 'I've been working since'. Also, 'half years' should be 'half a year' for singular time duration.

× I work in one of her and our clinic.

✓ I work in one of our clinics.

The phrase 'one of her and our clinic' is incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition and possessive pronoun usage is 'one of our clinics' to indicate belonging to the speaker's group.

× I have been working here since three years and I learned a lot of skills from a physio.

✓ I have been working here for three years and I have learned a lot of skills from a physio.

When using 'since' or 'for' with durations, 'for' is appropriate for a period of time like 'three years'. Also, 'I learned' should be in present perfect 'I have learned' to indicate experience up to now.

× Because of my colleagues are. Of providing me a good. Twerking atmosphere so that I I don't have any disturbances with my colleagues and I would say it's it's a very good place to work.

✓ Because my colleagues provide me with a good working atmosphere so that I don't have any disturbances, and I would say it's a very good place to work.

The original sentence has fragmented and incorrect pronoun and verb usage. 'Because of my colleagues are' is incorrect; it should be 'Because my colleagues provide'. Also, 'twerking' is a typo for 'working'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I do love the place where I work because of being a visitor priest is my. A dream goal I always wanted to fulfill. 1 angle. Good thing is that I finally started working in the physio clinic where I can exhibit my full.

✓ Yes, I do love the place where I work because being a physiotherapist is my dream goal I have always wanted to fulfill. The good thing is that I finally started working in the physio clinic where I can fully exhibit my skills.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun and word usage ('visitor priest' likely meant 'physiotherapist'). Also, sentence fragments and unclear phrases like '1 angle' are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Space there, no specific future plans but maybe I would start up my physio clinic come in a nearby surroundings to the place where I live because we rarely find with the clinics inflicted area so I think I I can it's a good.

✓ There are no specific future plans, but maybe I will start up my physio clinic in the nearby surroundings of the place where I live because we rarely find clinics in this area, so I think it's a good idea.

The original sentence has incorrect future tense usage ('would' should be 'will' for future plans), incorrect prepositions ('come in' corrected to 'in'), and unclear phrasing. The sentence is corrected for proper future tense and clarity.