Work— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "bored walking and starting" hay "working at a teacher". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: I am currently pursuing a master's degree while working as a teacher. It can be quite challenging due to the heavy workload, but I enjoy learning new things because it helps me grow both personally and professionally.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh những câu không liên quan hoặc không rõ nghĩa như "Bass is the reason why I know my steering very well". Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời có cấu trúc rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để nối ý.

Exemplo: I work at a small local education center where the atmosphere is quite relaxed. Although it can be tough during exam periods, I find the job rewarding because I get to help students improve their skills.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ "coworker here are on so friendly" nên sửa thành "coworkers here are very friendly". Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

Exemplo: Yes, it is a good place to work. I can communicate well with my students, who always show respect by listening carefully and participating actively. Moreover, my coworkers are very friendly, and we often share learning experiences and ideas that help me improve.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "income hear it quite height" hay "his can bait for my interest". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. It is a professional and friendly environment where I can learn a lot from my coworkers. Also, the salary is quite good, which motivates me to work harder.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên tránh những từ ngữ không rõ nghĩa như "NER" và câu ngắt quãng "Uh, if things work out". Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể về kế hoạch tương lai.

Exemplo: First of all, I want to finish my master's degree, which is my top priority. After that, I plan to continue teaching, but I am also considering applying for better job opportunities at larger schools if possible.

× Currently I am bored walking and starting.

✓ Currently I am bored with walking and studying.

The verb 'bored' should be followed by 'with' plus a noun or gerund to indicate the cause of boredom. 'Starting' is incorrect here; likely intended 'studying'. So, 'bored with walking and studying' is correct.

× I am pursuing a masters degree while working at a teacher where can be quite challenging at times due to a bunch of work.

✓ I am pursuing a master's degree while working as a teacher, which can be quite challenging at times due to a lot of work.

The phrase 'working at a teacher' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'as' for a job role. Also, 'where' should be 'which' to refer to the job. 'Masters degree' needs an apostrophe: 'master's degree'.

× I work in a local center, it quite small and so everything here is pretty laid back.

✓ I work in a local center; it is quite small, so everything here is pretty laid back.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'it'. Also, the comma should be replaced with a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses.

× Bass is the reason why I know my steering very well.

✓ That is the reason why I know my teaching very well.

'Bass' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'That' fits better. 'Steering' is incorrect; 'teaching' is the intended word. Also, 'know my teaching' is awkward; better to say 'know my subject' or 'know my teaching well'.

× Honestly it quite rewarding even though it can be tough sometimes, especially during exam period.

✓ Honestly, it is quite rewarding even though it can be tough sometimes, especially during the exam period.

The verb 'is' is missing after 'it'. Also, 'exam period' should have the definite article 'the'.

× Yes, absolutely I can communicate well with my student.

✓ Yes, absolutely I can communicate well with my students.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context of teaching multiple students.

× They always showed respect by listening carefully and participating actively in my class.

✓ They always show respect by listening carefully and participating actively in my class.

The tense should be present simple 'show' to match the habitual action. 'Showed' is past tense and inconsistent with the context.

× Moreover, coworker here are on so friendly, we usually share some learning experience and ideas with can help me.

✓ Moreover, coworkers here are so friendly; we usually share some learning experiences and ideas which can help me.

'Coworker' should be plural 'coworkers'. 'On' is incorrect and should be removed. 'Experience' should be plural 'experiences'. 'With can help me' is incorrect; 'which can help me' is correct.

× Yes 100% as I mentioned is he a professional and friendly environment where I can learn a lot of things from the coworker and also the income hear it quite height and his can bait for my interest.

✓ Yes, 100%. As I mentioned, it is a professional and friendly environment where I can learn a lot of things from the coworkers, and also the income here is quite high and this can benefit my interests.

'Is he' should be 'it is'. 'Coworker' should be plural 'coworkers'. 'Income hear it quite height' is incorrect; should be 'income here is quite high'. 'His can bait for my interest' is incorrect; should be 'this can benefit my interests'.

× Well first of all I really want to finish my master degree.

✓ Well, first of all, I really want to finish my master's degree.

'Master degree' needs an apostrophe: 'master's degree'. Commas added for clarity.

× After that I plan to continue teaching, but I'm also thinking about applying for better job opportunity, maybe a NER, bigger school.

✓ After that, I plan to continue teaching, but I'm also thinking about applying for a better job opportunity, maybe a newer, bigger school.

'Better job opportunity' needs an article 'a'. 'NER' is likely a typo for 'newer'. Commas added for clarity.

× Uh, if things work out.

✓ Uh, if things work out, I will apply for the new job.

The sentence is incomplete; it is a dependent clause and needs a main clause to complete the thought.