Party— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like parties?
수험생
I do and I don't. I mean, there are times when I want to spend time with my friends and I wanna go to parties, but then most often they're not. I find myself loving and enjoying my own company and staying alone.
시험관
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
수험생
Growing up, I always had parties and family gatherings 'cause my both of my parents are very social, so they very frequently organize parties and family gatherings and social gatherings and all the rest of it.
시험관
Have you ever organized a party?
수험생
I haven't, actually, but that doesn't mean I'm not open to the idea of hosting a party. I wouldn't consider myself a good cook, but I would like to think that I'm a good host.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like parties?
점수: 70.0제안: Apni uttor ektu spostho o prabhabi korte paren. Prothome spostho bhabe bolun apni party pochhondo koren kina, tarpor karon shoho kichu bistarito bolun. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke aro sohoj o logical korun.
예시: Yes, I like parties sometimes because they give me a chance to meet my friends and have fun. However, I also enjoy spending time alone as it helps me relax and recharge.
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
점수: 75.0제안: Apnar uttor ektu concise o clear korte hobe. Prothome direct uttor din, tarpor specific details shoho kichu supporting information din. Linking words babohar kore uttor ke logical korun.
예시: When I was a kid, I often had parties because my parents are very social. They frequently organized family gatherings, which made my childhood lively and enjoyable.
Have you ever organized a party?
점수: 80.0제안: Apnar uttor bhalo, kintu aro kichu specific details add korte paren. Prothome direct uttor din, tarpor karon o opinion shoho kichu supporting details din. Linking words babohar korun.
예시: No, I haven't organized a party yet, but I am open to the idea. Although I am not a good cook, I believe I can be a good host by making my guests feel comfortable and welcome.
문법
× I mean, there are times when I want to spend time with my friends and I wanna go to parties, but then most often they're not.
✓ I mean, there are times when I want to spend time with my friends and I wanna go to parties, but then most often they are not.
The contraction 'they're' is informal and can be ambiguous in this context. Expanding it to 'they are' clarifies the meaning and maintains formality. Also, 'most often they are not' is clearer than 'most often they're not' in spoken English for clarity.
× Growing up, I always had parties and family gatherings 'cause my both of my parents are very social, so they very frequently organize parties and family gatherings and social gatherings and all the rest of it.
✓ Growing up, I always had parties and family gatherings because both of my parents are very social, so they very frequently organized parties, family gatherings, social gatherings, and all the rest of it.
The phrase 'my both of my parents' is incorrect; it should be 'both of my parents'. Also, since the question is about the past, 'organize' should be in past tense 'organized' to maintain tense consistency.
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