Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。英語の表現を自然にし、パーティーが好きな理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、感情や経験を具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: Yes, I like parties because they give me a chance to meet new people and have fun in a lively atmosphere.

제안: 回答が繰り返しや不明瞭な表現を含んでいます。頻度を明確に述べ、理由を簡潔に説明しましょう。また、文法と語彙の正確さを向上させる必要があります。

예시: I had parties about once a year because in Japan, parties are not very common among young people and usually happen only on special occasions.

제안: 文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。過去の経験を正確に表現し、理由や感情を明確に述べる練習が必要です。

예시: Yes, I have organized a party for my friend's birthday because I wanted to celebrate with him and it made me happy to see him smile.

× Yes, I like party because it's unable to express my thought to others and it gives me a sense of excitement to entire funny location.

✓ Yes, I like parties because they allow me to express my thoughts to others and they give me a sense of excitement in an entertaining place.

The word 'party' should be plural 'parties' to match the general statement. Also, 'it's unable to express' is incorrect; the subject should be 'they' referring to parties, and the verb should be 'allow' to express thoughts. 'Entire funny location' is unclear and corrected to 'entertaining place' for clarity.

× Yes, I like party because it's unable to express my thought to others and it gives me a sense of excitement to entire funny location.

✓ Yes, I like parties because they allow me to express my thoughts to others and they give me a sense of excitement in an entertaining place.

The preposition 'to' before 'entire funny location' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate location.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The plural form 'parties' is more appropriate when asking about frequency of events in the past.

× Umm, I think once a year, because in Japan the parties are not popular among young people, so we only have a Poly.

✓ Umm, I think once a year, because in Japan parties are not popular among young people, so we only have a party.

The word 'Poly' seems to be a typo and should be 'party'. Also, 'the parties' can be simplified to 'parties' for general statement.

× Special occasion only special occasion.

✓ Only on special occasions.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks proper structure. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct phrase.

× Yes, I harp, I used to hear the party for my friend because I want to celebrate it my friend birthday and I granted to see that his smiling face.

✓ Yes, I have organized a party for my friend because I wanted to celebrate his birthday and I was happy to see his smiling face.

'I harp' and 'I used to hear the party' are incorrect phrases. 'I have organized' is the correct present perfect tense. 'I want to celebrate it my friend birthday' should be 'I wanted to celebrate his birthday'. 'I granted to see' is incorrect; 'I was happy to see' is appropriate.