Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ естественный и понятный, но можно улучшить связность и разнообразие лексики. Попробуйте использовать более разнообразные выражения и связки, чтобы сделать ответ более плавным и интересным.

예시: Yes, I enjoy parties, but I prefer those that are quiet and relaxed rather than noisy and wild. Therefore, I usually choose to celebrate with my closest friends, as I feel most comfortable and at ease in their company.

제안: Ответ содержит повтор и небольшие ошибки, что снижает его естественность. Рекомендуется избегать повторов и использовать связующие слова для улучшения структуры и плавности речи.

예시: When I was a child, I didn't have many parties, usually only on my birthday or on the birthdays of my closest friends. However, as I became a teenager, I started attending parties more frequently.

제안: Ответ информативен, но можно улучшить грамматическую точность и связность. Используйте более точные времена и добавьте связующие слова для лучшей логики.

예시: I usually don't like organizing parties because it involves many tasks, such as arranging food and especially cleaning the apartment afterward. However, once I organized a surprise party for my girlfriend's birthday, and I was really glad to have that experience because she was very happy.

× I like parties, but not too noisy ones and without too much alcohol.

✓ I like parties, but not too noisy ones and not with too much alcohol.

The phrase 'without too much alcohol' is awkward in this context. Using 'not with too much alcohol' is more natural and grammatically correct to express the intended meaning.

× When I was a kid I used to have parties, not often only on my birthday, on on birthday of my closest friends, but when I became teenager I started to go to parties a bit more often.

✓ When I was a kid I used to have parties, not often, only on my birthday and on the birthdays of my closest friends, but when I became a teenager I started to go to parties a bit more often.

The phrase 'on on birthday' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'on the birthdays'. Also, 'birthday' should be plural because it refers to multiple friends. Additionally, 'became teenager' lacks the article 'a' before 'teenager'.

× But once I organized an unexpected party for my girlfriend to celebrate her birthday and I really glad to have this experience because she was very happy.

✓ But once I organized an unexpected party for my girlfriend to celebrate her birthday and I was really glad to have this experience because she was very happy.

The phrase 'I really glad' is missing the past tense verb 'was'. The correct form is 'I was really glad' to match the past tense context of the sentence.