Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai về động từ. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I really like parties because they give me a chance to meet new friends and have a great time. I especially enjoy dancing and listening to music at these events.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

예시: Honestly, I rarely had big parties when I was a kid because my father was very busy, and my family didn't have enough money to organize large celebrations.

제안: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời. Hãy tránh câu bị ngắt quãng và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về bữa tiệc.

예시: Yes, I organized my birthday party last year. I invited my family and close friends to my house. We cooked a lot of delicious food and had a wonderful time together.

× That's of course I really likes parties because I can meet new friends and have a great moment with them.

✓ That's of course I really like parties because I can meet new friends and have a great moment with them.

The verb 'likes' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'like' in the present tense. The third person singular form 'likes' is used only with he, she, or it.

× I enjoy dancing and listening music in the party.

✓ I enjoy dancing and listening to music at the party.

The verb 'listening' requires the preposition 'to' before its object. Also, 'in the party' should be 'at the party' to correctly indicate location of an event.

× Honestly, I rarely have a big party when I were a little kid because my father is so busy and my family have not enough money to celebrate a big party for me.

✓ Honestly, I rarely had a big party when I was a little kid because my father was so busy and my family did not have enough money to celebrate a big party for me.

The sentence refers to past events, so past tense verbs should be used: 'have' to 'had', 'were' to 'was', 'is' to 'was', and 'have' to 'did have'. Also, 'did not have' is the correct negative past form.

× Yes, I organize my birthday party last year.

✓ Yes, I organized my birthday party last year.

Since the action happened in the past ('last year'), the verb should be in the past tense 'organized' instead of the present tense 'organize'.

× I invite my family and close friend to celebrate me as my house.

✓ I invited my family and close friends to celebrate with me at my house.

The verb should be past tense 'invited' to match the past time. 'Close friend' should be plural 'close friends' to match 'family'. The phrase 'celebrate me as my house' is incorrect; it should be 'celebrate with me at my house'.

× We cook a lot of delicious foods and.

✓ We cooked a lot of delicious food.

The sentence is incomplete and ends with 'and' without continuation. Also, 'foods' is usually uncountable in this context, so 'food' is preferred. The verb should be past tense 'cooked' to match the past event.