Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: この回答は文法的な誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「I really enjoy produce」は意味が不明瞭で、「I really enjoy parties」と言うべきです。また、例の説明も冗長で繰り返しが多いです。より自然で効果的な答え方としては、質問に直接答えた後、具体的な経験を簡潔に述べることが重要です。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy parties. For example, the last party I attended was a ceremony at UMM for international exchange students, and I had a great time meeting people from different countries.

제안: この回答は繰り返しや言い淀みが多く、流暢さが欠けています。また、「Big 1」という表現は不明瞭で、より具体的な説明が必要です。回答は簡潔にし、繰り返しを避け、具体的な内容を明確に述べることが大切です。

예시: When I was a kid, my family hosted a birthday party once a year. Many of my classmates attended because it was a big event, and I always enjoyed celebrating with them.

제안: この回答は言い淀みや発音の誤りがあり、文法的にも不自然な部分があります。例えば、「organ organized」や「M my or our party」などの誤りは避けるべきです。回答は明確で簡潔にし、計画について具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I have never organized a party by myself yet, but my friend and I from university are planning to host a farewell party in a few months since we are in the same social circle.

× I really enjoy produce.

✓ I really enjoy producing.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, so 'produce' should be corrected to 'producing'.

× I enjoy a lot.

✓ I enjoyed it a lot.

The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'enjoyed'. Also, adding 'it' clarifies the object of enjoyment.

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

The question is correct but the student's answer uses singular 'a party' which is less natural. Using plural 'parties' fits better with the question about frequency.

× My, my family hosted a party once a year for my birthday.

✓ My family hosted a party once a year for my birthday.

The repeated 'My' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× a lot of my classmates joined my party because it was kind of Big 1

✓ a lot of my classmates joined my party because it was kind of big one

'Big 1' is incorrect; it should be 'big one' to correctly use the adjective and noun.

× I've never organ organized any party yet,

✓ I've never organized any party yet,

The verb 'organize' is misspelled as 'organ organized'. The correct past participle form is 'organized'.

× but I have plan to organize M my or our party with my with one of my friends from uni,

✓ but I have a plan to organize my or our party with one of my friends from uni,

The phrase 'have plan' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'M my' is a typo and should be 'my'.

× we were planning to host farewell party in few months.

✓ we are planning to host a farewell party in a few months.

Since the event is in the future, present continuous 'are planning' is appropriate. Also, 'farewell party' needs the article 'a', and 'few months' should be 'a few months'.