Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有些错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词形式（如making应为make），避免重复表达，并使用更连贯的连接词，使回答更流畅。

예시: I like parties when I feel energetic because they are a great way to make new friends. However, if I am tired, I find parties too noisy and prefer a quiet place to relax.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和动词形式（was应为I was，invited应为invite）。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的时态，并丰富细节，使内容更具体。

예시: When I was a child, I had a birthday party once a year. I usually invited my close friends and family to celebrate, and those moments are unforgettable to me.

제안: 回答中时态使用不一致，且表达不够自然。建议统一时态，使用更地道的表达方式，并增加细节描述，使回答更丰富。

예시: Yes, I organize a party every year on my birthday. I invite my friends and family, and we enjoy dinner together and share a cake. These celebrations are always memorable for me.

× While I am energetic, I think party is a good way to making friends.

✓ While I am energetic, I think party is a good way to make friends.

动词后接动名词时，'to'作为介词后应接动词原形，这里应使用'make'而非'making'。

× I think party is a good way to make friends.

✓ I think parties are a good way to make friends.

party作为可数名词，表示一般情况时应使用复数形式parties，且谓语动词与复数主语保持一致。

× When was a child, I had a party once a year, which is my birthday party.

✓ When I was a child, I had a party once a year, which was my birthday party.

缺少主语'I'，且时间状语从句中应使用过去时态，'which'引导的定语从句中谓语动词也应与先行词时态一致。

× At that time, I would invited my close friends and my parents to join it.

✓ At that time, I would invite my close friends and my parents to join it.

情态动词would后应接动词原形，不能使用过去式invited。

× Yes, I have organized a party every year in my birthday.

✓ Yes, I have organized a party every year on my birthday.

表示习惯性动作时，使用现在完成时态是可以的，但介词应为'on'而非'in'。

× At that time, I will invite my friends and my parents to join it, and we eat dinner together and distribute the cake.

✓ At that time, I would invite my friends and my parents to join it, and we ate dinner together and distributed the cake.

描述过去的习惯动作时，应使用过去时态，'will'应改为'would'，动词也应改为过去式。