Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法的な誤りを修正し、より自然な表現を使うことが重要です。また、回答は簡潔で効果的にするために、冗長な部分を避けましょう。

예시: Yes, I enjoy going to parties and also hosting them at my home because it allows me to socialize with friends in a comfortable environment.

제안: 文法の誤りを直し、具体的な頻度や詳細を明確に述べることで、内容を豊かにしましょう。また、接続詞を使って文の流れを良くすることが大切です。

예시: When I was a child, my family often had parties. For example, my birthday party was held once a year, and we also celebrated my sister's birthday regularly.

제안: 前置詞の使い方や文法を正しくし、理由を明確に述べることで、より自然で効果的な回答になります。

예시: Yes, I often organize birthday parties for my friends because I can invite many people, which makes the parties more enjoyable.

× Yes, I enjoy going party and holding a party at my home.

✓ Yes, I enjoy going to parties and holding a party at my home.

The verb 'going' should be followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating attending events, and 'party' should be pluralized to 'parties' to indicate general enjoyment of such events.

× When I was a child, we all my family had a lot of party.

✓ When I was a child, all my family had a lot of parties.

The phrase 'we all my family' is incorrect; 'all my family' is sufficient. Also, 'party' should be pluralized to 'parties' to indicate multiple events.

× For example, my birthday party was held once a year and my sister's birthday party is also held.

✓ For example, my birthday party was held once a year and my sister's birthday party was also held.

The sentence refers to past events, so 'is' should be changed to 'was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I often organize for my friends birthday party because I can invite a lot of people and it makes parties so enjoyable.

✓ I often organize my friends' birthday parties because I can invite a lot of people and it makes parties so enjoyable.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary after 'organize'. Also, 'friends' should be possessive ('friends' birthday party' to 'friends' birthday parties') and 'party' should be pluralized to 'parties' to indicate multiple events.