Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it could be more concise and structured. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid repeating similar ideas like 'usually' twice.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy parties. For instance, I host a monthly gathering at my house where friends and I play new board games and enjoy snacks and drinks together.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by adding a concluding sentence. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to express feelings and reasons.

예시: I rarely had parties as a child because I was shy and lacked confidence. Consequently, I found it difficult to communicate with other kids and was afraid to invite them over.

제안: Your answer is good but could be more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, then adding specific examples with linking words. Also, avoid repeating 'great' and try to use more descriptive vocabulary.

예시: Yes, I enjoy organizing parties. For example, last Halloween and New Year's Eve, my friends and I hosted large gatherings where we prepared dishes like pasta, mac and cheese, and pizza, which made the events very enjoyable.

× Usually once a month I invite all of my friends to my house and we throw a big party with snacks and drinks and we hang out together.

✓ Usually once a month I invite all of my friends to my house and we throw a big party with snacks and drinks where we hang out together.

The original sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved for clarity by connecting the last part with 'where' to indicate the location of hanging out. This is not a strict grammar error but a style improvement.

× Usually we like to come up with some new games, some new board games.

✓ Usually we like to come up with some new games, including some new board games.

The original sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved by adding 'including' to clarify that board games are a subset of the new games. This is a style improvement rather than a grammar error.

× When I was a kid I didn't have parties quite often because I was a shy and not very confident child, so it was hard for me to communicate with other kids and I was a little bit scared to invite them somewhere.

✓ When I was a kid I didn't have parties very often because I was a shy and not very confident child, so it was hard for me to communicate with other kids and I was a little bit scared to invite them somewhere.

The phrase 'quite often' is not typically used with negative constructions like 'didn't have'. 'Very often' is more appropriate here to express infrequency. This is a usage issue related to adverb placement and collocation.