Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 중복 표현을 피하며, 주제에 직접적으로 답하는 문장으로 시작하세요.

예시: No, I don't like parties because I prefer spending time alone. Being alone makes me feel more comfortable, and I don't enjoy being around many people.

제안: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고, 문장이 길고 중복된 부분이 있습니다. 질문에 직접 답하고, 구체적인 빈도와 경험을 명확하게 표현하세요.

예시: I don't remember exactly, but I was sometimes invited to my friend's birthday parties. I went to their homes, celebrated with them, and gave presents.

제안: 답변이 다소 반복적이고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 이유를 명확히 제시하고, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 구성하세요.

예시: No, I have never organized a party because I don't like noisy events. That's the main reason why I avoid parties.

× No, I like parties because I prefer spending lots of times alone.

✓ No, I like parties because I prefer spending lots of time alone.

'Time' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'times'. The correct phrase is 'lots of time'.

× Spending lots of times make me more make me feel comfortable.

✓ Spending lots of time makes me feel more comfortable.

'Time' should be singular as it is uncountable. Also, the verb should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'Spending lots of time'. The phrase 'make me more make me feel' is redundant and corrected to 'makes me feel more'.

× So and I don't like in many people between many people.

✓ Also, I don't like being around many people.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'So and' is incorrect conjunction usage, and 'I don't like in many people between many people' is confusing. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunction and preposition to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I don't remember what, but I sometimes I was invited my friend's birthday party.

✓ I don't remember exactly, but sometimes I was invited to my friend's birthday party.

The phrase 'I was invited my friend's birthday party' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'sometimes I was invited' is better placed without the extra 'I'. The correction adds 'to' and improves sentence flow.

× So I went to her homes and I celebrated my friend's birthday and gave us some present.

✓ So I went to her home, celebrated my friend's birthday, and gave her some presents.

'Homes' should be singular 'home' when referring to one friend's house. 'Gave us some present' is incorrect; it should be 'gave her some presents' to indicate giving gifts to the friend. Also, 'present' should be plural 'presents' if more than one gift is implied.

× No, I have never organized the party because I don't like noisy events, so I don't like parties.

✓ No, I have never organized a party because I don't like noisy events, so I don't like parties.

'The party' implies a specific party known to both speaker and listener, but here it refers to any party in general, so the indefinite article 'a' is appropriate.

× Yes, this is very big reason of that.

✓ Yes, this is a very big reason for that.

The phrase 'very big reason of that' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'for' and the article 'a' is needed before 'very big reason'.