Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中表达了个人喜好，但语言表达不够自然，且“can't afford it”用法不当，应表达对噪音的承受能力而非经济负担。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免语义错误。

예시: Actually, I don't enjoy parties because I'm quite introverted. The loud noise at parties often makes me feel uncomfortable, so I usually prefer quieter environments.

제안: 回答语法和表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，信息不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的时态和句子结构，并补充具体细节。

예시: When I was a child, we had a party once a year during the Spring Festival. It was a special time for family reunions, and everyone enjoyed celebrating together.

제안: 回答较完整，表达了组织派对的经历，但部分句子较简单，缺少连接词使内容显得有些断裂。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I have organized a party for my birthday last year. I invited my friends and relatives, and they brought many gifts. We all had a wonderful time celebrating together.

× If I go to a party I will be upset by the noise.

✓ If I go to a party, I will be upset by the noise.

原句中缺少逗号，导致句子结构不清晰。虽然这不是严格的单复数错误，但根据语法规范，条件状语从句后应加逗号以分隔主句和从句。

× When I was a little I had a party once a year.

✓ When I was little, I had a party once a year.

“a little”是形容词短语，通常用来修饰名词；这里应使用副词“little”表示“小时候”，且句中缺少逗号。

× When we got together it's it was the festival for family uni and I find it very hard to find the.

✓ When we got together, it was the festival for family unity, and I found it very hard to find it.

原句结构混乱，存在重复词汇“it's it was”，且“family uni”应为“family unity”，时态应保持一致，且句尾缺少宾语。

× When we got together it's it was the festival for family uni and I find it very hard to find the.

✓ When we got together, it was the festival for family unity, and I found it very hard to find it.

句中“find”应使用过去式“found”，因为描述的是过去的经历。

× MMM yes I have.

✓ MMM yes, I have.

句中缺少逗号，影响语气表达。

× I had a party for my birthday one year ago.

✓ I had a party for my birthday one year ago.

句子正确，无需修改。

× I invited my friends and relatives to my party and they brought many gifts for me and that day we had a great time.

✓ I invited my friends and relatives to my party, and they brought many gifts for me. That day, we had a great time.

原句过长，缺少必要的标点符号，导致句子结构不清晰。应适当分句并加逗号。

× It was very wonderful.

✓ It was wonderful.

“wonderful”本身已经是形容词，前面加“very”显得冗余，建议直接使用“wonderful”。