Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和冗余，同时注意语法正确。

예시: Yes, I like parties, but I prefer quiet and peaceful ones rather than noisy gatherings.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，导致表达含糊。建议直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持，同时注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: When I was a kid, I had parties only once or twice a month because I didn't like organizing them; I thought it was a waste of time.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议用简洁的句子直接回答问题，并用具体原因支持，同时注意语法的正确性。

예시: No, I have never organized a party because I find it complicated and I don't think I can do it well.

× Yes, but I don't like the type so that likes looking noisy because I don't like to be noise.

✓ Yes, but I don't like the type that looks noisy because I don't like noise.

句中使用了错误的关系代词“so that”，应改为“that”来引导定语从句；另外，“likes looking noisy”应改为“looks noisy”，因为“look”是感官动词，后接形容词。最后，“I don't like to be noise”应改为“I don't like noise”，因为“noise”是名词，不能用作状态动词。

× Yes, but I don't like the type so that likes looking noisy because I don't like to be noise.

✓ Yes, but I don't like the type that looks noisy because I don't like noise.

“likes looking noisy”中“looking”用法不当，应使用形容词“noisy”来描述“type”的特征。

× I like to be quiet and peaceful.

✓ I like to be quiet and peaceful.

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

“party”应使用复数形式“parties”，因为询问的是频率，表示多次活动。

× Now often earn just one or two per month because I don't like to arrange a party or 10 because it is much a waste of time.

✓ Now I often have just one or two per month because I don't like to arrange parties or 10 because it is much a waste of time.

“earn”应为“have”，表示“举办”；“a party or 10”应改为“parties or 10”，保持复数形式一致。

× Now often earn just one or two per month because I don't like to arrange a party or 10 because it is much a waste of time.

✓ Now I often have just one or two per month because I don't like to arrange parties or 10 because it is much a waste of time.

句中缺少主语“I”，且“earn”用法错误，应改为“have”。

× Now often earn just one or two per month because I don't like to arrange a party or 10 because it is much a waste of time.

✓ Now I often have just one or two per month because I don't like to arrange parties or even 10 because it is much a waste of time.

“or 10”表达不完整，建议加“even”使表达更自然。

× No, never. I don't like to arrange such activities because it is a very complex for me and I can show I can't do it well for for myself.

✓ No, never. I don't like to arrange such activities because they are very complex for me and I can show that I can't do it well by myself.

“it is a very complex”中“complex”应为形容词，且主语应为复数“they”；“for for myself”重复，应改为“by myself”；“I can show I can't do it well”缺少连接词“that”。