Party— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like parties?
수험생
Well no I don't as I am an introverted person, I prefer to spend free time by myself and I'm free and I'll be quite nervous and stressful when I'm in crowded places with people around me, so I don't like party at all.
시험관
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
수험생
Well just once a time, once a year, it usually on my birthday and I'm invited all my friends and families with me to celebrate this, to celebrate my birthday together and we will have a birthday cake together and I will blew out the cradles and make a birthday wish.
시험관
Have you ever organized a party?
수험생
Yes I had when I was a kid. I organized a party once a year for celebrate my birthday. I will. I would invite all my friends and families with me. We will have birthday cake together, wild blow out the cradles and make and made a birthday.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like parties?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答时语言不够自然流畅，有些表达重复且语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和冠词的使用。
예시: No, I don't like parties because I am an introvert. I prefer spending my free time alone, as crowded places make me feel nervous and stressed.
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答内容较丰富，但语法和用词错误较多，且句子较长导致表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，简化句子结构，并注意拼写错误。
예시: I had a party once a year, usually on my birthday. I invited all my friends and family to celebrate together. We had a birthday cake, and I blew out the candles and made a wish.
Have you ever organized a party?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中存在时态混用和语法错误，表达不连贯。建议统一时态，理清句子结构，避免重复和拼写错误，使表达更自然流畅。
예시: Yes, I used to organize a party every year for my birthday. I invited all my friends and family. We had a birthday cake, and I blew out the candles and made a wish.
문법
× I don't like party at all.
✓ I don't like parties at all.
这里的'party'应该用复数形式，因为表达的是一般喜欢或不喜欢参加派对的情况，复数形式更合适。
× Well just once a time, once a year, it usually on my birthday and I'm invited all my friends and families with me to celebrate this, to celebrate my birthday together and we will have a birthday cake together and I will blew out the cradles and make a birthday wish.
✓ Well, just once a time, once a year, usually on my birthday, and I invited all my friends and family with me to celebrate this, to celebrate my birthday together. We had a birthday cake together and I blew out the candles and made a birthday wish.
这里涉及多个过去时态错误：'I'm invited'应为过去时'invited'；'we will have'应为过去时'had'；'I will blew'时态混乱，应为过去时'blew'；'make'应为过去时'made'。此外，'families'应为单数'family'，因为指的是自己的家人。
× I organized a party once a year for celebrate my birthday.
✓ I organized a party once a year to celebrate my birthday.
'for celebrate'是不正确的搭配，应该用不定式'to celebrate'表示目的。
× I will. I would invite all my friends and families with me.
✓ I would invite all my friends and family with me.
这里的'I will.'不完整且多余，应删除；'families'应为单数'family'，表示家人。
× We will have birthday cake together, wild blow out the cradles and make and made a birthday.
✓ We had birthday cake together, blew out the candles and made a birthday wish.
'will have'应为过去时'had'；'wild blow'应为过去时'blew'，且拼写错误；'cradles'应为'candles'；'make and made a birthday'不完整，应为'made a birthday wish'。
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