Party— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you like parties?
수험생
I don't like parties very much because they are often very noisy and crowded. Moreover, there is a lot of alcohol and high calorie food which makes me feel overwhelmed and stressful. I enjoy activities that are relaxing and peaceful, such as walking and reading.
시험관
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
수험생
When I was a kid, I rarely had parties with my friends because I was quite introverted and enjoyed spending time alone. I preferred watching movies and reading some novels by myself at home.
시험관
Have you ever organized a party?
수험생
Yes, I have organized a party before. When I was nine years old, I hosted a birthday party for myself and invited six of my best friends to my home. After that, we went to my favorite restaurant to eat delicious desserts, which was a wonderful experience.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you like parties?
점수: 85.0제안: 你的回答很自然且内容丰富，但可以稍微简化句子结构，避免重复表达“noisy and crowded”以及“overwhelmed and stressful”，使表达更简洁流畅。同时，可以使用更多连接词来增强逻辑性。
예시: I don't like parties because they are usually noisy and crowded. Besides, the presence of alcohol and high-calorie food makes me feel stressed. Therefore, I prefer relaxing activities like walking and reading.
How often did you have a party when you were a kid?
점수: 90.0제안: 你的回答结构清晰且内容具体，但可以增加一些连接词来使句子更连贯，例如使用“because”或“so”。此外，可以稍微丰富细节，比如说明喜欢的电影类型或小说。
예시: When I was a kid, I rarely had parties with my friends because I was quite introverted. So, I preferred spending time alone watching movies, especially cartoons, and reading novels at home.
Have you ever organized a party?
점수: 95.0제안: 你的回答内容具体且结构合理，表达自然。为了更好地展示语言能力，可以尝试使用更多连接词如“then”或“afterwards”，并加入一些感受或评价的细节。
예시: Yes, I have organized a party before. When I was nine, I hosted a birthday party at home and invited six close friends. Afterwards, we went to my favorite restaurant to enjoy delicious desserts, which made the day truly memorable.
문법
× Moreover, there is a lot of alcohol and high calorie food which makes me feel overwhelmed and stressful.
✓ Moreover, there is a lot of alcohol and high-calorie food which makes me feel overwhelmed and stressed.
The adjective 'high calorie' should be hyphenated as 'high-calorie' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Also, 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, but here the student wants to express their own feeling, so 'stressed' is the correct adjective to describe their emotional state.
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