Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: คำตอบควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อน เช่น การใช้คำว่า "party" ซ้ำหลายครั้ง และควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

예시: Yes, I like parties because they are a great opportunity to have fun with my friends. The food served is usually delicious, and after enjoying games and dancing, the food tastes even better. Therefore, a party combines good food and enjoyable activities perfectly.

제안: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำให้ถูกต้อง เช่น "many time" ควรเป็น "many times" และใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจน พร้อมเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความต่อเนื่องของเนื้อหา

예시: I didn't have many parties when I was a kid because my parents were often busy with work. However, I did attend some of my friends' birthday parties, which were really fun. We played games together and enjoyed eating birthday cake.

제안: ควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "had organized" ควรเป็น "organized" และปรับปรุงการใช้คำ เช่น "exhausted" ควรเป็น "exhausting" รวมถึงเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล

예시: Yes, I organized a farewell party for Taiwanese exchange students about two months ago. My responsibilities included arranging tables and chairs and decorating the school auditorium. Although it was exhausting, I was glad to have done it perfectly.

× Food in the parties are very delicious.

✓ Food at the parties is very delicious.

The subject 'Food' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'in the parties' should be 'at the parties' to correctly indicate location.

× When I finish it, dance or play game with my friends, the food will taste better for two times.

✓ When I finish eating, dancing or playing games with my friends, the food tastes twice as good.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect verb forms. 'Finish it' is vague; it should specify 'finish eating'. 'Dance or play game' should be 'dancing or playing games' to match parallel gerund forms. 'Taste better for two times' is incorrect; 'tastes twice as good' is the correct expression.

× Therefore, in one party their combination of good food and good.

✓ Therefore, in one party, there is a combination of good food and fun.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'there is' corrects the sentence structure. Also, 'good' is repeated without a noun; adding 'fun' completes the idea.

× I didn't have a party many time when I was a when I was a kid due to my parents, both of them often busy with their work.

✓ I didn't have many parties when I was a kid because my parents were often busy with their work.

'Many time' should be 'many parties' to match plural form. 'When I was a when I was a kid' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Due to' is better replaced with 'because' for clarity. 'Both of them often busy' needs past tense verb 'were'.

× However, I still had joining some of my friend birthday party and it was really fun.

✓ However, I still joined some of my friends' birthday parties and it was really fun.

'Had joining' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'joined'. 'Some of my friend birthday party' should be plural possessive 'friends' birthday parties'.

× We play game together and eat her birthday cake.

✓ We played games together and ate her birthday cake.

The question is about past events, so past tense verbs 'played' and 'ate' should be used. 'Game' should be plural 'games'.

× Yes, I had organized a farewell party for Taiwanese action students about two months ago.

✓ Yes, I organized a farewell party for Taiwanese exchange students about two months ago.

'Had organized' is past perfect tense, which is unnecessary here; simple past 'organized' is correct. 'Action students' seems to be a typo; 'exchange students' is likely intended.

× My responsibility was to arrange table and chairs and also decorated the location which was my school auditorium.

✓ My responsibility was to arrange tables and chairs and also decorate the location, which was my school auditorium.

'Table' should be plural 'tables' to match 'chairs'. 'Decorated' should be 'decorate' to parallel 'arrange' after 'was to'. A comma is added before 'which' for clarity.

× It was very exhausted, but I still glad to make it perfectly.

✓ It was very exhausting, but I was still glad to make it perfect.

'Exhausted' describes a feeling, but here the party was tiring, so 'exhausting' is correct. 'I still glad' needs the verb 'was'. 'Make it perfectly' should be 'make it perfect' to use the adjective after 'make'.