Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇，语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议减少重复，注意语法结构，使用更自然的表达方式，例如将"I'm a person easy to shy"改为"I'm a shy person"，并且注意单复数形式。

예시: Actually, I don't really like parties because I am a shy person. Parties are usually noisy, and I find it hard to communicate and be energetic in such environments.

제안: 回答较为简洁，但缺少连贯的连接词，且表达稍显生硬。建议使用连接词如"because"后面加上具体细节，句子结构更完整。

예시: I had parties maybe once or twice a year because we usually celebrated birthdays or special ceremonies like finishing school.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，避免重复。

예시: Yes, I once organized a birthday party for my mom and dad. I bought a cake, candles, and some flowers to decorate the place.

× Actually, actually not. Maybe because because I'm a person easy to shy and parties is a noisy places where I need to communicate with others and be more energetic to talk.

✓ Actually, actually not. Maybe because I'm a person who is easy to be shy and parties are noisy places where I need to communicate with others and be more energetic to talk.

这里的错误是单复数不一致。'parties is a noisy places'中，'parties'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，'places'也应保持复数形式。建议主谓一致，复数名词用复数动词。

× Actually, actually not. Maybe because because I'm a person easy to shy and parties is a noisy places where I need to communicate with others and be more energetic to talk.

✓ Actually, actually not. Maybe because I'm a person who is shy easily and parties are noisy places where I need to communicate with others and be more energetic to talk.

'easy to shy'用法不正确，应该用形容词或副词形式表达'容易害羞'，可以改为'who is shy easily'或'who is easily shy'。这里需要用形容词或副词修饰。

× Maybe one or two times a year because we have parties when we have birthday or some special ceremonies like finishing off schools.

✓ Maybe one or two times a year because we had parties when we had birthdays or some special ceremonies like finishing school.

这里描述过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态'had'，而不是现在时'have'。另外，'birthday'应为复数'birthdays'，'finishing off schools'表达不准确，改为'finishing school'更自然。

× I tried we have a birthday party for my mom and my father and I buy bought a cake and we also bought some candles and maybe flowers to decorate it.

✓ I tried to have a birthday party for my mom and my father. I bought a cake and we also bought some candles and maybe flowers to decorate it.

'I tried we have'结构不正确，应该是'I tried to have'。'buy bought'中'buy'是现在时，应去掉，保留过去时'bought'。整体时态应保持过去时。

× Also there's there were some blooms in.

✓ Also, there were some blooms in.

'there's there were'重复使用了两种时态的'there be'结构，应选择过去时'there were'，并去掉多余的'there's'。此外，句子不完整，建议补充完整表达。