Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复考官的问题，语言更自然流畅。可以简洁表达自己的感受，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: No, I don't really enjoy parties because I often feel shy and nervous around strangers, so I usually avoid attending them.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，建议注意时态和冠词的使用，同时句子结构应更清晰，避免重复。

예시: I rarely attended parties as a child because there was no tradition of holding parties in my country, except for birthday celebrations of friends.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议完整回答问题，避免口语填充词，句子应简洁明了。

예시: No, I have never organized a party because I prefer quiet places and I'm not interested in lively gatherings.

× I'm kind of I'm afraid of talking with strangers because I immediately feel shy and nervous when I am facing a person that I'm not familiar with.

✓ I'm kind of afraid of talking with strangers because I immediately feel shy and nervous when I face a person that I'm not familiar with.

这里“I'm kind of I'm afraid”重复，应该去掉多余的“I'm”。另外，“when I am facing”中“am facing”用现在进行时不合适，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“face”。

× So I always avoid attending the parties.

✓ So I always avoid attending parties.

“parties”前不需要定冠词“the”，因为这里指的是一般的聚会，不是特指的聚会。

× When I was a kid I rarely attend the party because there is no any tradition in my country to holding a party and when I was a kid we only hold a party when our friends have the have to celebrate their birthday.

✓ When I was a kid I rarely attended parties because there was no tradition in my country of holding parties, and when I was a kid we only held parties when our friends had to celebrate their birthdays.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态，如“attended”、“was”、“held”、“had”。“no any”是错误搭配，应改为“no”。“to holding”应改为“of holding”。“party”应使用复数形式“parties”，因为指的是一般的聚会。

× there is no any tradition in my country to holding a party

✓ there is no tradition in my country of holding a party

“no any”是错误的量词搭配，应使用“no”或“any”之一。

× there is no any tradition in my country to holding a party

✓ there is no tradition in my country of holding a party

动词“holding”前应使用介词“of”而非“to”。

× we only hold a party when our friends have the have to celebrate their birthday.

✓ we only held parties when our friends had to celebrate their birthdays.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时态“held”和“had”。“have the have to”重复，应去掉多余部分。

× Actually, no, because I'm afraid of attending a party as I just mentioned and umm, I'm not interested in the party because it's too naughty and I tend to stay in some quiet places, so I organize the.

✓ Actually, no, because I'm afraid of attending parties as I just mentioned, and umm, I'm not interested in parties because they're too noisy and I tend to stay in quiet places, so I don't organize them.

“too naughty”用词不当，应改为“too noisy”表示吵闹。“the party”应改为复数“parties”，因为泛指。“so I organize the.”句子不完整，应补充完整表达否定含义“so I don't organize them”。