Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is very brief and lacks natural flow. Try to provide a clear topic sentence and then explain your reasons with linking words to make your response more coherent and engaging. Avoid negative phrasing like 'I don't want to talk with others' and instead express your feelings more naturally.

예시: I don't really enjoy parties because I find them quite overwhelming. For instance, I prefer quiet environments where I can relax rather than crowded places where I have to socialise a lot.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Make sure to respond with a clear topic sentence and provide specific details about the frequency of parties during your childhood. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: When I was a child, I usually had parties only on special occasions, such as food festivals or holidays. For example, my family would organise a party once or twice a year during these times.

제안: Your answer is too short and does not answer the question. Always respond directly to the question with a complete sentence and provide supporting details if possible. This will help demonstrate your language ability and keep the conversation flowing.

예시: Yes, I have organised a party before. Last year, I planned a birthday party for my friend, which included arranging decorations and inviting guests.

× When I was happening in a food special holiday to a party.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to have parties on special food holidays.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear, lacking a proper subject and verb structure. The phrase 'I was happening' is incorrect; 'I was' needs a complement, and 'happening' is not used correctly here. The correction provides a clear subject and verb, fitting the question about childhood parties and using the past habitual tense 'used to' to indicate repeated past actions.