Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more direct and concise. Start with a clear opinion, then add specific reasons or examples using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid vague phrases like 'it depends also on the people who invited me' without elaboration.

예시: Yes, I enjoy parties, especially when they are with close friends and family. However, recently I haven't attended many because of my busy schedule. I find that the atmosphere and company really make a party enjoyable.

제안: Your answer is good but could be improved by adding linking words and more specific details. For example, explain which parties you liked most and why, and use connectors to make your answer flow better.

예시: When I was a kid, I often attended birthday parties and family celebrations. For instance, I especially enjoyed birthday parties because I could play games and eat cake. Additionally, my mother took me to weddings, which were always lively and fun.

제안: Try to give a more confident and structured answer. Start with a clear statement, then provide specific details about the parties you organized. Avoid phrases like 'I can't recall much information' which make your answer unclear.

예시: Yes, I have organized birthday parties for my children. For example, last year I planned a small party with decorations, games, and food for my son's birthday. It was a rewarding experience because I enjoyed seeing my kids happy.

× I used to go for parties and celebrations a lot.

✓ I used to go to parties and celebrations a lot.

The correct preposition to use with 'go' when referring to events is 'to', not 'for'. So, 'go to parties' is correct, while 'go for parties' is incorrect.

× Nowadays I don't have much time to go for celebrations.

✓ Nowadays I don't have much time to go to celebrations.

Similar to the previous sentence, the correct preposition with 'go' when referring to events is 'to'. Therefore, 'go to celebrations' is correct.

× it depends also on the people who invited me.

✓ it also depends on the people who invited me.

The adverb 'also' should be placed before the verb 'depends' for correct word order. Additionally, the preposition 'on' is correctly used here.

× I enjoyed being in birthday parties

✓ I enjoyed being at birthday parties

The correct preposition to use with 'being' and events like parties is 'at', not 'in'. So, 'being at birthday parties' is correct.

× my mother was taking me to wedding parties as well.

✓ my mother used to take me to wedding parties as well.

The phrase 'was taking' suggests a continuous past action, but here a habitual past action is intended, so 'used to take' is more appropriate. The preposition 'to' is correct.

× I don't remember that I participated in more parties organization.

✓ I don't remember that I participated more in party organization.

The phrase 'participated in more parties organization' is awkward. It is better to say 'participated more in party organization'. Also, 'party organization' is uncountable here, so 'parties organization' is incorrect.