Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'have meet' nên là 'meet' hoặc 'have met'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng, ví dụ như bạn thích tiệc vì nó giúp bạn thư giãn và gặp gỡ bạn bè.

예시: Yes, I like parties because they help me relax and meet new friends after a busy day. I enjoy the lively atmosphere and the chance to socialize with others.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, có cấu trúc câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về tần suất tổ chức tiệc khi còn nhỏ và những dịp đặc biệt như sinh nhật hoặc lễ hội.

예시: When I was a kid, I usually had parties on special occasions like birthdays and holidays. My family often organized these gatherings, and I enjoyed celebrating with my friends.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động đã xảy ra trong quá khứ như 'organized' và 'planned'. Câu trả lời nên có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và các chi tiết hỗ trợ mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ như 'friend' và 'best friend'.

예시: Yes, I organized a birthday party last year. I planned everything, including the food and decorations, and invited many friends to celebrate with me.

× Yes, I'd like to join the party because when I join the party I have meet more friends and parties make me feel happy after a busy day and party has made me the people.

✓ Yes, I'd like to join the party because when I join the party I have met more friends and parties make me feel happy after a busy day and parties have made me the person I am.

The verb 'meet' should be in the past participle form 'met' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'party has made me the people' is incorrect; it should be 'parties have made me the person I am' to correctly use plural and singular forms and express the intended meaning.

× When I were when I was a kid, I have used to have a party, for example, it's a birthday or a holiday.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to have parties, for example, on birthdays or holidays.

The phrase 'When I were' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'When I was'. 'I have used to have' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I used to have' to express past habitual actions. Also, 'a party' should be plural 'parties' to match the general statement, and 'it's a birthday or a holiday' should be 'on birthdays or holidays' to use the correct preposition and plural form.

× For example, my friends have a birthday and and I can't and I can't join the party and for example, my family have organized.

✓ For example, when my friends have a birthday, I can't join the party, and my family has organized one.

The sentence has repeated conjunctions 'and and' and lacks clarity. 'My friends have a birthday' should be followed by a clear clause. 'I can't and I can't join the party' is repetitive and incorrect. Also, 'my family have organized' should be 'my family has organized' to agree with the singular collective noun 'family'.

× Yes, I have organized a party. I organize a birthday party last year.

✓ Yes, I have organized a party. I organized a birthday party last year.

The sentence 'I organize a birthday party last year' uses the present tense 'organize' incorrectly for a past event. It should be in the past tense 'organized' to match the time reference 'last year'.

× I plan everything from the food and the decorations, and I invite many friends and best friend.

✓ I planned everything from the food to the decorations, and I invited many friends and my best friend.

The verb tense should be past 'planned' and 'invited' to match the past event. 'From the food and the decorations' should be 'from the food to the decorations' to correctly express the range. 'Many friends and best friend' is incorrect; it should be 'many friends and my best friend' to specify the singular best friend.