Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it could be improved by correcting the article usage ('an introvert person') and by adding linking words to make the response more coherent. Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

예시: No, I don't like parties because I'm an introverted person who prefers staying in on weekends. Moreover, I generally avoid drinking, so parties don't appeal to me.

제안: Your answer is very brief and lacks detail. To improve, provide a complete sentence with a topic sentence and supporting details, and use linking words to make it more natural and effective.

예시: I never used to have parties when I was a kid because my family preferred quiet gatherings. Therefore, I rarely experienced big celebrations during my childhood.

제안: Your answer is relevant and provides supporting details, but it contains some grammatical errors ('an introvert' instead of 'a introvert', 'with myself' is awkward). Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence and avoid redundancy.

예시: No, I have never organized a party because I am not a party person. Since I am generally very introverted, I prefer to keep things low-key and celebrate quietly by myself.

× No, I don't like parties because I'm a introvert person.

✓ No, I don't like parties because I'm an introvert person.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'introvert' to ensure correct pronunciation and grammar.

× I like to keep the things low key.

✓ I like to keep things low key.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'things' in this context. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I like to celebrate and party on my own with myself.

✓ I like to celebrate and party on my own.

Using 'with myself' is redundant and incorrect here. 'On my own' already conveys the meaning of doing something alone, so 'with myself' should be omitted.