Party— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和冗余表达，句子结构应更自然流畅。例如，'sometimes I am an outgoing person with my friends'表达不够自然，可以改为'I am quite outgoing when I am with my friends'。此外，注意冠词使用，如'a party'。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy parties. I am quite outgoing when I am with my friends, and we always celebrate each other's birthdays together. We usually have a great time sharing food and playing games.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，应简洁明了地回答问题，并使用连接词使句子连贯。例如，'my family is not so rich to can afford parties frequently'应改为'my family couldn't afford parties often when I was little'。

예시: It's hard to say exactly, but my family couldn't afford parties often when I was little. Usually, we had parties during the Spring Festival or on birthdays, which were special occasions to gather with family and friends.

제안: 回答不完整且语法混乱，应完整表达观点并避免断句错误。建议使用连贯的句子结构，清晰说明组织派对的经历和感受。

예시: Yes, I have organized parties before. I enjoy it because it makes me happy to plan everything step by step, from preparing the house to inviting people I like. It feels rewarding to see everyone having a good time.

× we always have party when it is a birthday for each other.

✓ we always have parties when it is a birthday for each other.

这里的“party”应该用复数形式“parties”，因为指的是多次的聚会。中文解释：当表示多次事件时，名词应使用复数形式。

× How often did you have a party when you were a kid?

✓ How often did you have parties when you were a kid?

这里“party”应改为复数“parties”，因为询问的是过去多次的聚会频率。中文解释：询问过去频率时，名词应使用复数形式。

× it my family is not so rich to can afford parties frequently.

✓ my family was not rich enough to afford parties frequently.

时态应为过去时，且“to can”结构错误，应为“to afford”。中文解释：描述过去情况时，动词应使用过去时；“to can”是不正确的结构，应使用“to + 动词原形”。

× So maybe it is on Spring festival or just birthday parties.

✓ So maybe it is during the Spring Festival or just birthday parties.

节日期间应使用介词“during”而非“on”。中文解释：表示某一时间段时，通常用“during”而非“on”。

× We could gather people together to have a big party.

✓ We could gather people together to have a big party.

此句无复数错误，保持原句。

× I can organize everything 1 by 1 and I can. House and invite people I like.

✓ I can organize everything one by one, and I can host and invite people I like.

“House”用作动词应为“host”，且“1 by 1”应写为“one by one”，句子结构需调整。中文解释：数字表达应完整书写，动词使用应准确，句子结构需连贯。