Money— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用更自然且简洁的表达来直接回答问题，避免语法和用词错误；补充一两句具体细节并使用连接词使回答更连贯。比如说明什么时候会向父母借款和原因。注意句子长度不要超过五句。

예시: No, I rarely borrow money from others; I only borrow from my parents when I need help. For example, they gave me a generous allowance during university to cover living expenses, so I haven't needed to ask friends or banks for loans.

제안: 改正语法错误并使表述更清晰自然；用连接词提供原因或例子，说明你借钱给朋友的情形和限制。避免矛盾句子（如同时说信任陌生人），保持句子简洁。

예시: Not often. I only lend money to close friends whom I trust, usually for small amounts and for a short time. For instance, I once lent a friend $50 to cover a taxi ride and they paid me back the next day.

× No, I've never borrowed money from others except my parents.

✓ No, I've never borrowed money from others except from my parents.

问题类型：冠词/介词使用错误。原句中缺少介词 from 来引出借钱的对象。在英语中表达“除了我的父母之外”时，常用 except from my parents 或者 simply except my parents 但在此语境下加上 from 更自然。建议：在表示“从某人那里借”时使用 from，例如 borrow money from my parents。

× In the most time, my mom will give me substantial money for life, which can be called superfluous.

✓ Most of the time, my mom gives me substantial money for living expenses, which could be considered excessive.

问题类型：现在时/时态与词序错误。原句中短语“In the most time”不正确，应该是 “Most of the time”。此外句子使用 will 表示习惯行为不恰当，习惯性动作应使用一般现在时（gives）。另外“for life”用法不明，应改为“for living expenses（生活费）”；“can be called superfluous”改为更自然的被动态或情态表达“could be considered excessive”。建议：描述经常性行为时用一般现在时，注意固定搭配（most of the time, for living expenses, considered excessive）。

× Exactly few.

✓ Very few.

问题类型：量词/限定词使用错误。短语 “Exactly few” 不符合英语表达习惯。正确表达“很少的”应使用 “very few” 或 “only a few”。建议：用常见搭配 very few 或 only a few 来表达数量很少。

× I only lend money to my most intimate friends who I can trust.

✓ I only lend money to my closest friends whom I can trust.

问题类型：句子结构与关系代词使用错误。原句中 “most intimate friends” 用法不自然，改为 “closest friends”。关系代词作宾语时应使用 whom（或在口语中可用 who），更正式写作用 whom。建议：注意形容词搭配及关系代词的主宾用法；“who”作主语，“whom”作宾语。

× It's obviously that I can trust some strangers or just acquaintances to lend them money.

✓ It's obvious that I wouldn't trust strangers or mere acquaintances enough to lend them money.

问题类型：形容词/副词使用与句型错误。原句“It’s obviously that”不正确，应该用“It’s obvious that”。另外语义上应表达“不愿意把钱借给陌生人或只是点头之交”，因此需要用否定结构 “wouldn't trust... enough to lend them money”。“just acquaintances”更自然改为 “mere acquaintances”。建议：注意固定表达 “It’s obvious that...” 并调整语气与否定结构以符合原意，选择更贴切的形容词（mere）。