History— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung, nhưng bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không rõ nghĩa như "Help" và nên hoàn thiện câu ví dụ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Yes, I have studied history, especially during my school years. I found it fascinating to learn about past events and how they have shaped the world we live in today. For example, studying ancient civilizations like Egypt helped me understand the origins of modern society.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không chính xác như "watching teacher" và các từ ngữ không trang trọng như "you know". Hãy sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

예시: I usually learn history by reading textbooks and attending lectures from my teachers at school, which makes the learning experience engaging and enjoyable.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "has earth broaden" và "how to people". Bạn nên luyện tập sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để truyền đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

예시: I believe that learning history broadens our knowledge about past events and helps us understand how people in the past shaped the world.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng từ "shocked" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng từ chính xác hơn để diễn đạt ý nghĩa một cách tự nhiên và chính xác.

예시: Yes, I believe learning history is very important because it helps us understand how past events have influenced our present society. For example, by studying history, we can learn from previous mistakes and appreciate our cultural heritage.

× For example, studying ancient civilization Help.

✓ For example, studying ancient civilizations helps.

The original sentence lacks a verb and has a singular noun 'civilization' which should be plural 'civilizations' to match the context. Also, 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'studying ancient civilizations'. This is a verb in the present participle form issue and subject-verb agreement.

× I usually learn history through a combination of reading textbooks and watching teacher in my school, which makes the learning experience more like, you know, engaging and amazing.

✓ I usually learn history through a combination of reading textbooks and watching teachers in my school, which makes the learning experience more engaging and amazing.

The phrase 'watching teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'watching teachers' to indicate plural and correct noun usage. Also, 'more like, you know, engaging and amazing' is informal and redundant; 'more engaging and amazing' is clearer and grammatically correct. This relates to incorrect use of plural nouns and sentence structure.

× I believe that learning history has earth broaden our knowledge about the past event and we know how to people in the past shape the world.

✓ I believe that learning history has broadened our knowledge about past events and helps us understand how people in the past shaped the world.

The phrase 'has earth broaden' is incorrect; 'earth' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Past event' should be plural 'past events'. Also, 'we know how to people in the past shape the world' is ungrammatical; it should be 'helps us understand how people in the past shaped the world'. This involves incorrect use of quantifiers, verb tense, and sentence structure.